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I have a Japanese student of English. I have bumped into a sentence in a text book: Until now no governor had ever been elected for more than two consecutive terms of office. Is this 'had' correct? ( I think it should be 'has.') If I am not correct, would you elaborate. Thank you.

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I think you are correct. But if the speaker is really talking about the present ("now"), I don't think the phrase, "until now," adds meaning. The sentence should simply be, "No governor has ever been elected for more than two...."

If the discussion is about something that just happened for the first time (the sitting, 2-term governor has just won a second term), the most accurate phrasing would be, "Until the recent election, no governor had ever been elected for more than two terms of office."  The phrasing that caught your attention is odd and imprecise and should not have made it by an editor.

Hope this helps.

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