Expert: Greg Miller - 10/26/2011

Question
Hi Greg. I'm trying to write my first novel and I'm having some doubts as I progress, so I got some questions for you.

I'm afraid my story might seem a little monotonous sometimes. The life of the main character starts being repetitive until he finds the way to overcome his situation.
It is set in different cities as it advances, but in these locations the characters frequent the same businesses/places in a way that might seem excessive. Due to his occupations the activities of character are also similar. I'm trying to work on this aspect so I'd like to ask if you have any suggestion to avoid this kind of things.

My second question: I have a hard time describing buildings, interiors, furniture. I'd like to ask you how specific should I go when I want to create an impression of this kind of things.

Third: I'm planning to remove a sub-chapter in which the main character returns to his home town to recover his former girlfriend. The story isn't centered in this relationship, and my concern is that readers might find this boring since like flashbacks it stops the story from progressing.

Fourth and last: I'd appreciate any tip that could help me make the story entertaining for readers without boring them.

Answer
Hi Ariel - All good questions and issues to be considering.

1) One way to create shape, dynamics and texture is to make sure that each location/episode/chapter/beat covers a different aspect of the character's emotional journey and that you vary the length of time and level of detail devoted to each. Chart it on an outline or using index cards.

2) re: details: a little goes a long way. Pick details that have emotional, thematic or metaphorical resonance. Like accessories, it's good to pile them on in a rough draft, but remove a few before you go out.

3) Flashbacks (and sub-plots) ideally will a) move the main story forward AND b) have some thematic resonance.

4) Cut out the boring parts and make what's left really funny, really poignant or really move the story forward.

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Best,

Greg Miller
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