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About Richard Seltzer
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Thinking "out-of-the-box" -- seeing Internet-related opportunities that may have been missed. Taking basic business/technology ideas and expressing them in terms of user benefits and long-term implications. Helping startups that have depended on early adopters to revise their content to reach and serve a general audience. Using content and knowledge of search engines to build traffic to Web sites. Helping to build successful chat events and forums.

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AltaVista, Compaq, Harcourt, Hitachi, and numerous small companies and startups

 
   

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E-Commerce, Web Businesses - Critique Needed


Expert: Richard Seltzer - 1/2/2007

Question
I need you to critique my website for my babysitting business. I want to make it better by changing some things, editing, revising some stuff, .etc...

http://www.geocities.com/wildflowerneu/wildflower_babysitting.html

Any help is much appreciated! :D

Answer
Your web site is excellent. I'm very impressed.  You should be the one giving advice, not me.
You have all the facts a potential customer might want, presented very clearly and simply.  I wish someone like you had been around in our neighborhood when my kids were young enough to need babysitting.
That's simply terrific.
Best wishes.
Richard Seltzer, seltzer@samizdat.com

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