English as a Second Language/Please could you check my writing Thanks a lot
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement In Daily Mirror dated 26 of January.
I think my skills and experience make a great fit for the Position Of Juniour Manager.
I am a 20 year old student at the Local sport College and studying to become a football coach.
I also have some management skills. I was in charge of promotional sports projects aimed at increasing teenagers and adults' in participation in sport.
I as well handled a budget of 2500 dollars USA and I supervised a team of part time staff.
I also have some prior experience as a football referee.
I am a hard-working and diligent students with excellent reference from my professors. I was given the title The Best students after I earned top marks during my first semester at college.
I would like to have an opportunity to have an interview.
I can start job after February 1 st.
I am writing in reference to your advertisement in the Daily Mirror dated 26 of January.
I think my skills and experience are a great fit for the position of Junior Manager.
I am a (20 year old) student at the local Sport College, preparing to become a football coach. As far as my management skills go, I was in charge of promotional sports projects aimed at increasing teenagers and adults participation in sports. In that capacity I handled a budget of $ 2500 and I supervised a team of part time staff. On top of that, I also have some prior experience as a football referee.
I am a hard-working and diligent students with excellent reference from my professors. I was awarded the title of "Best Student" after I earned top marks during my first semester in college.
With that in mind, I would welcome the opportunity of an interview with you as I am sure I will be able to demonstrate that I am the perfect candidate for the job.
If offered the job, I am available to start after February 1 st.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
- here in the US we don't ever mention our age in a job application, so you may want to remove that from your text
- you have capitalized some words that need no capitalization
- most sentences start with "I" it's bothersome, so I tried to change that
- your ending was a bit abrupt, I added there what I consider the "standard" way of ending a business like letter
I hope this helps.
PS - I apologize for not getting back to your messages, I've been super busy lately