AboutAnne Benington Expertise I can answer questions about English grammar, style, usage. I can also help a writer assess the development of an essay, its unity, concrete support of topics, introductions and conclusions. In addition, I can discuss "writing the research paper" in all aspects of its development. Finally, I can assist in development of creative writing assignments. I will not totally proofread and correct a paper, but I will point out areas of concern and ways a writer can discover weaknesses and how to correct them.
Experience 20 years teaching high school English including 10 years teaching AP English literature; four years teaching college composition
Education/Credentials BS St. Mary of the Woods College, Indiana
MA University of Notre Dame, Indiana
Post graduate work: University of Michigan, University of Pittsburg
Awards and Honors Crystal Apple Outstanding Teacher of the Year award--1995--Awarded yearly to four teachers in all schools, public, private and parochial, in the Middletown, Edgewood, Madison school dictricts, Ohio. Archdiocese of Cincinnati Innovative Teaching Award 1996. Teacher of the Year Award, Fenwick High School, Middletown, OH, 2002,
Expert: Anne Benington Date: 5/10/2008 Subject: Grammar & syntax.
Question Hello Anne,
is it correct in english language? Thanks.
Massgraves' ideology. When bolshevism from surreal story was made into history, now and then generated the most savage and ruthless genocidal systems in mankind memory.
Answer Hello Ken,
I think some words are missing from your sentence. Is this what you intended to say?
"When bolshevism, which had its roots in a surreal story, became a reality in history, now and then it generated the most savage and ruthless genocidal systems in the memory of mankind."
If this sentence does not convey your meaning, let me know and I'll try to write something closer to your ideas.
