AboutJerry Leone Expertise I`ve taught writing or some aspect of the English language for nearly 35 years. I can answer nearly any question on grammar, usage or meanings of words above dictionary usage. An avid crossword fan and writer, I can also answer questions about business presentations and resumes.
Experience I have worked with words all my life as a teacher of the language and as an amateur and professional writer. Communication is a vital force in my life and everyone else's.
Expert: Jerry Leone Date: 6/27/2008 Subject: short text
Question Hi Jerry.
Will you check if everything's fine with the short text below?
Hello X
Sorry that I kept you waiting so long with my answer, but I was just unsure if I really wanted to take this course in September.
Now I know that I have got a place on another course starting July 25 through August 22 in X. This date suits me better than the one in September so I thought I might take advantage of the course starting in July.
That's it Jerry. Thanks.
Answer Luke,
Try this:
Sorry that I kept you waiting so long with my answer, but I was just unsure if I really wanted to take this course in September.
Now that I know I have a place on another course, starting July 25th through August 22nd in X. These dates suit me better than the one in September so I thought I might take advantage of the course starting in July.
