General Writing and Grammar Help/Sentences
Expert: Ted Nesbitt - 11/6/2009
Question1.Do both sentences of each set below have identical meanings?
It was said that John was a child prodigy when he was young.
John was said to be a child prodigy when he was young.
It occurred to me that I had to hand in a report before I went to school.
It struck me that I had to hand in a report today before I went to school.
You should allow for his age and don’t ask him to do too much work.
You should consider his age and don’t ask him to do too much work.
This article as a whole is well-organized.
This article is overall well-organized.
I need to carry on with my work.
I need to continue with my work.
The watch that John gave me is a genuine Swiss make.
The watch that John gave me is a genuine one made in Swiss.
My girlfriend’s birthday and mine are on the same day.
My girlfriend’s birthday coincides with mine.
2.Are all the sentences below grammatically correct?
John is not stable in his academic performance.
Long term exposure to second hand smoke could pose a threat to our lungs.
Global warming has made it necessary for us to reduce CO2 emissions.
He was pulled over by the police because of speeding
( Can I say, “..because he sped”?)
During his forties, the novelist lived in the mountains, where he wrote many of his famous works.
Time is much limited; therefore (or consequently) , we must concentrate on the essentials and ignore trifling details.
The train left when I was about to get to the station.
He is optimistic about his mother’s illness.
He is pessimistic that the stock market will recover (bounce) soon.
His judgment (or love for his children) is disinterested.
3.Are all the sentences below grammatically correct?
It rained on and off all day.
I have two brothers: John and David. The former is doctor and the latter is a lawyer.
I am in favor of going to the beach on foot rather than by car.
The model is posing in front of the media.
(Do the conversations below make sense?)
A: Hi, Mary? (on the phone)
B: Yes. That is funny! I was about to call you. ( Or I was on the point of calling you.)
A: Is John considered a good student in your class?
B: No, he is mediocre.
4. Ex: There are very large quantities of oranges on sale in the market.
A vast/large quantity of imported beer has been sold.
Can I say, “ There is a large quantity of oranges….”in the first sentence and “large quantities of imported beer” in the second sentence? What’s the difference?
AnswerQuestion:
1.Do both sentences of each set below have identical meanings?
It was said that John was a child prodigy when he was young.
John was said to be a child prodigy when he was young.
IDENTICAL
It occurred to me that I had to hand in a report before I went to school.
It struck me that I had to hand in a report today before I went to school.
IDENTICAL
You should allow for his age and don’t ask him to do too much work.
You should consider his age and don’t ask him to do too much work.
IDENTICAL
This article as a whole is well-organized.
This article is overall well-organized.
IDENTICAL
I need to carry on with my work.
I need to continue with my work.
IDENTICAL
The watch that John gave me is a genuine Swiss make.
The watch that John gave me is a genuine one made in Swiss.
IDENTICAL
My girlfriend’s birthday and mine are on the same day.
My girlfriend’s birthday coincides with mine.
IDENTICAL
2.Are all the sentences below grammatically correct?
John is not stable in his academic performance.
YES
Long term exposure to second hand smoke could pose a threat to our lungs.
YES, BUT SECOND-HAND IS USUALLY HYPHENATED
Global warming has made it necessary for us to reduce CO2 emissions.
YES
He was pulled over by the police because of speeding
YES
( Can I say, “..because he sped”?)
YES
During his forties, the novelist lived in the mountains, where he wrote many of
his famous works.
YES
Time is much limited; therefore (or consequently) , we must concentrate on the
essentials and ignore trifling details.
YES, AND BOTH CONJUNCTIVE ADVERBS ARE APPROPRIATE
The train left when I was about to get to the station.
YES
He is optimistic about his mother’s illness.
YES
He is pessimistic that the stock market will recover (bounce) soon.
RECOVER = YES; IF YOU USE "BOUNCE," YOU NEED TO WRITE "BOUNCE BACK"
His judgment (or love for his children) is disinterested.
YES
3.Are all the sentences below grammatically correct?
It rained on and off all day.
YES
I have two brothers: John and David. The former is doctor and the latter is a
lawyer.
YES
I am in favor of going to the beach on foot rather than by car.
YES
The model is posing in front of the media.
YES
(Do the conversations below make sense?)
A: Hi, Mary? (on the phone)
B: Yes. That is funny! I was about to call you. ( Or I was on the point of
calling you.)
YES -- BOTH OF B'S ANSWERS ARE GOOD
A: Is John considered a good student in your class?
B: No, he is mediocre.
YES
4. Ex: There are very large quantities of oranges on sale in the market.
A vast/large quantity of imported beer has been sold.
THESE ARE BOTH CORRECT
Can I say, “ There is a large quantity of oranges….”in the first sentence
YES
and
“large quantities of imported beer” in the second sentence? What’s the
difference?
YES
*** "Quantity" is a non-count noun, so using the singular form is preferable. However, there are instances in which you want to use the plural for specific meanings. For instance, the market has just received many crates of five DIFFERENT KINDS of oranges or twenty DIFFERENT BRANDS OR TYPES of beer from many different countries. In order to show that these items are vastly different from each other, they might choose to advertise using the PLURAL FORMS.
Ted