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Hi! I am Ali Ahmadian, an English teacher. I would be so thankful if you could help me to select the best choice in the following test.
1. The ancient Greeks started fire with (focused - concentrated) sunlight.

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Hello Ahmadian,
If these are the only choices I will use focused, though both of them seem OK. However, I would like to rephrase the whole sentence like this:
"The ancient Greeks started fire by focusing sunlight on kindling with a lens or mirror."

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Atif

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Atif

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I can assist students in grammar, syntax, sentence structure and words selection. I am particularly interested in proofreading academic and professional writing including letters, applications, memos, minutes of meetings, reports, home assignments etc. I have thoroughly read standard English idioms and phrases. I can also offer help in translation from Urdu into English and vice versa.

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I have been teaching English for ten years at the college level.

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I have a postgraduate degree in English Language teaching and English Literature.

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