General Writing and Grammar Help/comma?

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I want to engrave a message to my girlfriend on a necklace and I'm not sure if a comma is needed.  I'm going to engrave "with you everything" which is part of a line from a song she likes.  So would it be  "with you everything"  or "with you, everything"

Thanks for your help and happy holidays!

Keith Buy

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Hi, Keith,

How sweet!  Your second option is correct. Even better would be: "With you, everything."  

The differences are:
1) keep the quotation marks (showing it is a borrowed phrase) and
2) use a capital "W."

YES, keep the comma, too!

best to you,

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