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Hello

Hope you are fine. How is the following translation?

"sometimes thinking about some people brings a smile on your lips unconsciously. How beautiful are these smiles and how lovable are these some people."

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Hi, Hame,

You wrote: "sometimes thinking about some people brings a smile on your lips unconsciously. How beautiful are these smiles and how lovable are these some people."

I would change it in this way to make it better: Change "on" to "to" and take out "some" and you'll be fine.

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Sally

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