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Hello Deborah

I wrote an overview summary of many projects I plan to help the community. It is at http://tolga.info/overviewtable-back2.htm.

It would be appreciated if you could read it. Do not go to any trouble correcting it. What you could do is copy and paste it and just insert changes to save you time as there is a comparison feature in Microsoft word so I will know where the changes are made. I also have a doc file version of it at http://tolga.info/overviewtable-back2.doc

I value your opinion as well as I could consider changes to get more people interested.

Regards Richard.

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Hello Richard,

I did  read this... impressive.

One suggestion is where you state:

Some of the projects are [I would add another verb here so you bullet points are grammatically correct].

Some of the projects are designed:



Regards,

Dr. D

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Deborah Burgess

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Essays--I can assist students with questions concerning the process of writing an essay including preparation of an outline, development of a topic, development of the thesis statement and topic sentences, and paragraph development. I can assist students in helping them determine the proper rhetorical modes for their essay (narration, illustration, description, process analysis, comparison and contrast, and argumentation. I am able to answer questions concerning rules of style for a research paper including referencing sources. I am able to address questions regarding punctuation and grammar.

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I teach a writing workshop for the University of Phoenix (Richmond Campus) and two college courses: Essentials of College Writing and Elements of Composition.

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Doctor of Management--University of Phoenix Masters in Human Resources--George Washington University B.A.--French and Linguistics, Oakland University

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