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Hi Deborah,

Are you able to help me write the following better:

Hi Natalie,

Please find enclosed my updated Resume for considerations of other contracts.

At present time there has been no indication that the contract with XYZ will extend. If anything the QA manager, Reuben Mitchell has said in a QA meeting on Tuesday, the 5th of August that he would like to extend all but there is no sign off from the CEO. Further to that, he mentioned that having contracts on board was only meant to be a "once only".

I trust you will assist me with finding my next contract opportunity.

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Hello JJ,

Hi Natalie,

Enclosed please find my updated resume for consideration of other contract opportunities.

Right now, there is no indication that my contract with XYZ will be extended. In fact, the Quality Assurance manager said in a meeting held on August 5 that he would like to extend all the contract personnel but the CEO will not approved the extension.  It seems the CEO is of the mindset that that having contract personnel on board was meant to be a "once only" situation.

I hope I can count on you to assist me in finding my next contract opportunity.


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Deborah Burgess

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Essays--I can assist students with questions concerning the process of writing an essay including preparation of an outline, development of a topic, development of the thesis statement and topic sentences, and paragraph development. I can assist students in helping them determine the proper rhetorical modes for their essay (narration, illustration, description, process analysis, comparison and contrast, and argumentation. I am able to answer questions concerning rules of style for a research paper including referencing sources. I am able to address questions regarding punctuation and grammar.

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I teach a writing workshop for the University of Phoenix (Richmond Campus) and two college courses: Essentials of College Writing and Elements of Composition.

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Doctor of Management--University of Phoenix Masters in Human Resources--George Washington University B.A.--French and Linguistics, Oakland University

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