General Writing and Grammar Help/paraphrase a sentence


1) "Yakitori are bite-sized pieces of chicken that have mariented in a sweet, soy-based sauce called teriyaki sauce, and grilled on a skewer."

This sentence says that Yakitori have mariented in teriyaki sauce. "Sweet" and "soy-based sauce" are modifying the teriyaki sauce, i.e these two adjectives are giving extra information about teriyaki sauce. Am I right?

Let, "sweet" and "soy-based teriyaki sauce" are two different items. ( I want to say sweet is not now modifying teriyaki sauce, and it is different from teriyaki sauce). Let, to make a dish of yakitori we have to marient the pieces of chicken both in sweet and teriyaki sauce. In this case, which form the sentence 1 will take? i,e how one will paraphrase the sentence 1?

No, "sweet soy-based sauce "called" teriyaki sauce.... is adjectives to describe a sauce "called" teriyaki.

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