General Writing and Grammar Help/Comma and modifying
Does the presence of a comma before the final word of a compound sentence change which clause the final word modifies?
"I don't want to be hated, for things I wouldn't consider doing, again."
"I don't want to be hated, for things I wouldn't consider doing again."
Does "again" modify "hated" in the first sentence and "doing" in the second? Is there a rule for this?
Thanks, Justin, for your question.
(I would probably quibble with your characterizing either example as a "compound sentence," but that's for another discussion.)
Which word is modified, if the sentence is crafted correctly, depends on the position of that word with respect to the modifier. If there's a single modifier, that modifier should appear adjacent to the word modified. Correctly analyzed, "again" in your sentence 1 is what is sometimes called an absolute
expression, in that it applies to the sentence as a whole and not to any of its elements. Its proper meaning is that the speaker is saying again
that he/she doesn't want to be hated.
If your intention is to convey someone's being hated another time (with "again" modifying "hated"), the sentence could read:
I don't want to be hated again, for things I wouldn't consider doing.
You're right that in sentence 2 "again" modifies "doing."
Positioning of a comma can indeed change the meaning, as indicated above, but not quite in the way you suggested.
You asked about a rule. A rule might be that a comma between two words can change or cancel the relation between them.
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