General Writing and Grammar Help/Titles, series, etc.

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Question
Which one is correct?
I watched three films: the lonely boy, the ghost and the bear.
I watched three films; he lonely boy, the ghost and the bear.

Answer
Sorry, Dan for confusing you with Paolo.

A. I watched three films: the lonely boy, the ghost and the bear.
B. I watched three films; the lonely boy, the ghost and the bear.

(I've rewritten B--I think you meant the, not he. )

B is wrong, as the colon is required to call attention to what follows. The semicolon is not appropriate.

Both are wrong because titles of films must be capitalized, as I've done below; and because they must be italicized, as I've also done below--or if italics are not available, they should be enclosed in quotes, as in my alternative below.

There is an issue also regarding your omission in both selections of a comma following ghost. The omission of the comma before the and or or in a series is quite common and is indeed sanctioned by some authorities. In both my opinion and that of The Chicago Manual of Style, however, it is incorrect.

Correct would be:

I watched three films: The Lonely Boy, The Ghost, and The Bear or
I watched three films: "The Lonely Boy," "The Ghost," and "The Bear"

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Dan, I have considered this as one question despite its complexity because your examples are intended to express the same thought. However, it would be a lot simpler and easier if in the future you'd restrict your questions to one (1) example each. Then you can always follow up with a related example.  

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