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Topic: Resume Help



Expert: Ruth Butler
Date: 12/24/2007
Subject: hello sir

Question
QUESTION: hello sir

can I send you my resume to check it & give me yout opinion
if you agree , please tell me where can I send it to you ?

wish to hear from you soon
thanks

ANSWER: Dear Jackie:

I am not a sir, but a woman!  I would be happy to look at your resume.  Just cut and paste it and send it via a followup question.  Warmly, R. Butler

---------- FOLLOW-UP ----------

QUESTION: I m sorry madam , excuse me

here it is my resume
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AHMED OSSAMA BAHGAT
1, Dumiat street (Boulkly) - 3rd floor , 302 Apartment
Egypt - Alexandria
Phone: +2035435364                                                                
Mobile:+20127216139    
Email: ao.bahgat@gmail.com

objective:
seeking a position in my career whereby I can build on the experience & knowledge that I gained through out my career , unfortuntly I havent practical experience because I m fresh graduate , but I m ready to take any training duration or an internship even if it is unpaid , moreover I dont mind to work in business field because thats interested to me so much as well as I have good knowledge in some business categories

Education:            
-Victoria british college language school (Alexandria - Egypt)  2001
 General certificate of secondary education , Grade  84%

-Alexandria institute of engineering & technology (Alexandria-Egypt)
 Bachelor degree in electronics & communication  ,  Graduated year (June 2006) , Grade  (" Good ")  
     
Graduation Project:"Multimedia Communication over Satellite & Mobile Communication Networks"
Supervised by: Prof.Dr. Said El-Khamy Professor, Faculty of Engineering ,Alexandria University                  

  
skills:perfect command of spoken & written arabic , perfect  command of spoken & written english
fair knowledge in french , Excellent use of windows os , Microsoft powerpoint & wordprocessing ,
Excellent use of Internet , Computer hardware & software maintainance , Fair knowledge in computer network

other knowledges: International business/trade- Business communication skills - LNP - Arts of negociations - Economics basics - Business management basics  - Marketing principles - E-business - E-commerce - Psycology & social reform - Recycling & waste management

Hobbies: Reading  -  music - roving -   writing poems - recording videos - traveling
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wish to hear from you soon
thanks  

Answer
Dear Jackie:

It seems your followup question got "lost" in cyberspace.  I just received it now.

Take out the objective...You can use it in a cover letter, but you would have to reword it.

Watch your spelling and grammar.

Set up the resume in a list format.  It will make it look better.

Example:

Skills:
Perfect command of spoken and written Arabic
Excellent command of spoken and written English
Proficient knowledge of French
Excellent usage of Windows OS

Also, take out the hobbies section.

Warmly, R. Butler

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