AboutRuth Butler Expertise I will answer questions about resumes and how to do well on an interview. I am a former employment counselor and I have owned my own resume and career counseling business since 1982.
Expert: Ruth Butler Date: 12/24/2007 Subject: hello sir
Question QUESTION: hello sir
can I send you my resume to check it & give me yout opinion
if you agree , please tell me where can I send it to you ?
wish to hear from you soon
thanks
ANSWER: Dear Jackie:
I am not a sir, but a woman! I would be happy to look at your resume. Just cut and paste it and send it via a followup question. Warmly, R. Butler
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QUESTION: I m sorry madam , excuse me
here it is my resume
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AHMED OSSAMA BAHGAT
1, Dumiat street (Boulkly) - 3rd floor , 302 Apartment
Egypt - Alexandria
Phone: +2035435364
Mobile:+20127216139
Email: ao.bahgat@gmail.com
objective:
seeking a position in my career whereby I can build on the experience & knowledge that I gained through out my career , unfortuntly I havent practical experience because I m fresh graduate , but I m ready to take any training duration or an internship even if it is unpaid , moreover I dont mind to work in business field because thats interested to me so much as well as I have good knowledge in some business categories
Education:
-Victoria british college language school (Alexandria - Egypt) 2001
General certificate of secondary education , Grade 84%
-Alexandria institute of engineering & technology (Alexandria-Egypt)
Bachelor degree in electronics & communication , Graduated year (June 2006) , Grade (" Good ")
Graduation Project:"Multimedia Communication over Satellite & Mobile Communication Networks"
Supervised by: Prof.Dr. Said El-Khamy Professor, Faculty of Engineering ,Alexandria University
skills:perfect command of spoken & written arabic , perfect command of spoken & written english
fair knowledge in french , Excellent use of windows os , Microsoft powerpoint & wordprocessing ,
Excellent use of Internet , Computer hardware & software maintainance , Fair knowledge in computer network
other knowledges: International business/trade- Business communication skills - LNP - Arts of negociations - Economics basics - Business management basics - Marketing principles - E-business - E-commerce - Psycology & social reform - Recycling & waste management
It seems your followup question got "lost" in cyberspace. I just received it now.
Take out the objective...You can use it in a cover letter, but you would have to reword it.
Watch your spelling and grammar.
Set up the resume in a list format. It will make it look better.
Example:
Skills:
Perfect command of spoken and written Arabic
Excellent command of spoken and written English
Proficient knowledge of French
Excellent usage of Windows OS