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Hello
I have to write argumentative essay and i choose global warming as a topic could u take a look at it(its not done i am having difficulties with it) maybe some idea anything that could help me to finish write this

Thesis: Contrary to what some believe, global warming does indeed exist.
I. Global Warming is a fraud.
A. Cycles of weather changed, changing and will change
B. Natural occurrences
II. Global warming exists
A. Raised in temperature
B, Melting icecaps

Since global warming appeared during the last decade as a serious environmental issue, it has been the subject of a lot of debate. Global warming is defined as the warming of the earth by greenhouse gases emitted into the atmosphere. But there are many questions about global warming, from its causes to its effects.

Many people even question whether or not global warming exists. And if global warming does exist, people question why it exists. Well, there are two different viewpoints. The believers in global warming think that the increased temperature proves that global warming exists, and that it's a significant problem that should not be taken lightly. Skeptics of global warming believe that the increased temperature is a natural phenomenon, and that if global warming does exist, it's not something to be worried about. There are many arguments for and against the existence of global warming, but contrary to what some believe, global warming does indeed exist and there is a valid scientific data to prove that.

(-NOW HERE THE PROBLEM STARTS !!!!!!)
Skeptics say that any temperature changes the Earth is experiencing are cyclical and a natural event. Climate has always changed due to natural cycles without any help from people. (i need to write here more)

Believers say that if global warming would be natural climate change, the change would not be happening as it is happening currently, and they are right. A temperature rise as fast as the one we have seen over the last thirty years has never happened before. During the past 10,000 years the earth has been in an...

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You are incorrect on several grounds. Global warming first appeared as an issue more than 30 years ago. Go do some more research.

Your first outline point contradicts your thesis statement. Go do some more research.

There is no point in going forward.

Hope this helps.

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