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School papers, Essays, Dissertations - Please help me proofread


Expert: Dan Smith - 11/20/2008

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Hello,

Please help me with proofreading the file below, I need to submit to apply to a position in my dental school organization. English is my second language and I have difficulties giving the final touch up on the paper. I appreciate all your help. Thank you.

Julie Harris.
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Julie Harris


Dear ASDA officers and faculty, (American Student Dental Association)

I would like to express my intent for the vice president position.  It was a great experience in the past year to be a part of ASDA officer body.  I have learned so much about ASDA’s structure, functions, and duties.  I will work with the rest of the future officers in representing ASDA, recruiting new and maintaining current members, organizing and attending events, fund raising, and helping the future president with any issue that might arise and any other obligation.
My current organization leadership experience includes:
ASDA Class Representative
Class of 2010 Treasurer
PSI O Academic Chair and Treasurer
Here are some of my personal qualifications that will help others and me to manage and maintain this organization:   I like to take initiative, I am very social and outgoing person, and at the same time very responsible.    I believe I can make a great contribution to expand ASDA’s potential as a vice president.



                       Sincerely,

                          Julie Harris


Answer
I am interested in the position of Vice President. It was a great experience in the past year to be a part of the ASDA officer body. I have learned so much about ASDA’s structure, functions, and duties. I will work with the rest of the future officers in representing ASDA, recruiting new members and maintaining current members, organizing and attending events, fund raising, and helping the future president with any issue that might arise.

My current organizational leadership experience includes:

ASDA Class Representative
Class of 2010 Treasurer
PSI O Academic Chair and Treasurer
Here are some of my personal qualifications that will help others and me to manage and maintain this organization:

I like to take initiative.

I am a very sociable and outgoing person and at the same time very responsible.

I believe I can make a great contribution toward expanding ASDA’s potential.

Hope this helps.

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