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Question I'm writing a paper, this is my introduction paragraph; I am wondering if it sounds okay to you, Thanks!
Love Is Patient
Throughout Elizabeth Gaskell’s Wives and Daughters, we can clearly see the different sorts of marriages Gaskell almost surely witnessed in her lifetime. Ranging from a cliché, ‘boy next door’, sort of romance between Molly and Roger, all the way to the chaotic, opposites must attract story of Mr. and Mrs. Gibson, and even the forbidden love of Osborne and Aimee; Wives and Daughters lets us glimpse at each couple’s situation and read into it what we may. Our attention is drawn most naturally towards Molly and Roger, and Molly’s undying devotion to him. As the story unfolds, what Molly has always seen in Roger, he finally begins to see in her. Through her whole life, Molly has watched and admired Roger, even when he was blinded by infatuation for Cynthia she waited, and when he finally returns her affections, this, the ultimate theme of love it proven that love is patient.
Answer Lizzie, very good introduction paragraph. I see you have started off with a broad viewpoint and narrowed it down to one aspect of the book. Finally, you have conclude with the thesis statement. Per you request, you intro sound fine to me. Keep up the good work.
