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About Elana Peled, Ed.D.
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I can answer questions related to the writing, formatting and development of academic papers, essays and dissertations, from selecting a topic and developing a thesis, to focusing a sentence and/or paragraph. I can also answer questions regarding syntax, grammar and punctuation. And I can answer questions regarding the role of creativity in academic writing as well as dealing with writer's block and procrastination.

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I have more than 20 years experience teaching academic writing to college students at every level. I have designed and taught courses on reading and writing for college freshman, both those who enter college ready to do college level work and those needing additional "catch-up" work. I've taught writing to students in master's programs and even designed a workbook to help students working on a master's thesis. I've worked in college writing centers helping students with papers for courses across the curriculum, and I've even coaching doctoral candidates through their dissertations, providing guidance for the process and direct feedback on their writing.

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*Ed.D., Human Development and Psychology with emphasis on Language and Literacy, Harvard Graduate School of Education *Ed.M., Language and Literacy, Harvard Graduate School of Education *M.A., English Composition, San Francisco State University *Certificate in Teaching Post-Secondary Reading, SFSU

 
   

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School papers, Essays, Dissertations - Admissions Essay


Expert: Elana Peled, Ed.D. - 9/10/2009

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Hello,
I am applying to the University of Texas as a transfer student.
The admissions essay topic is : "The statement of purpose will provide an opportunity to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your application. You may also want to explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had that relate to your academic discipline. The statement of purpose is not meant to be a listing of accomplishments in high school or a record of your participation in school-related activities. Rather, this is your opportunity to address the admission committee directly and to let us know more about you as an individual, in a manner that your transcripts and the other application information cannot convey."

I am having a hard time deciding what i should address in this essay. Additionally I am not sure what is meant by "extenuating circumstances".
Any help on this essay would be appreciated.

Thanks


Answer
Shane,

UT wants to know why you think you want to attend school there. They want to know why you think you'll be happier at UT than at any other university. They want to know if you'll finish your degree there once you've started. Anything you can tell them to convince them that you'll be an asset to their campus, things that won't be obvious from your other application materials, should be discussed in your essay.

Best wishes,
Elana


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