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college writting10/15/2009
  Q: I had to interview someone in child protective custody for my writing class.Know my question is how ...
  A: Your instructor should have given you instructions on how the report should be formatted. Ask him ...
articles in journals10/12/2009
  Q: I hope I've come to the right place! I have a few fairly basic questions about submitting articles ...
  A: 1. No. For example, Einstein as a Swiss patent clerk when he submitted his articles. 2. I am not ...
hi9/2/2009
  Q: Did you know without these three college strategies you probably won’t be able to make it through ...
  A: Generally, you should not use contractions in formal writing exercises. If you insist, they need ...
subject-object complement7/4/2009
  Q: What is your position on subject complement agreement? It seems as though more and more writers are ...
  A: I regard such disagreements as entirely incorrect. I don't write such sentences. In the case of the ...
Fee6/3/2009
  Q: I know this site is free but in case I need to check a very long essay, how much would you charged ...
  A: I charge by the piece. I'd need for you to send it to me and let me take a look. Then, I would give ...
APA Format6/3/2009
  Q: My professor says that every assignment must be written in APA Format. The first class assignment is ...
  A: Usually, when instructors make such a specification they are referring to the citation and ...
Plagiarism?5/21/2009
  Q: If you have a report to do and you have to research articles online for it and you reword the ...
  A: A bibliography is just the list of the sources you have cited in your manuscript. It doesn't say ...
help ASAP3/24/2009
  Q: Hey, PLEASE READ I KNOW YOU ARE A CREATIVE MIND ANY IDEAS YOU HAVE WILL BE APPRECIATED. Hi I'm in ...
  A: Those look like OK steps to me. A poster or a PowerPoint presentation would be fine. Either of your ...
Review3/23/2009
  Q: I had written an essay regarding my career gal and objective. Can you please review it and give me ...
  A: For the past 2 years I have been planning to earn an MBA. I am excited now to be on the cusp of ...
A couple of questions1/25/2009
  Q: I have to write a small term paper on EU customs, but for some reason I am not convince of the ...
  A: Try this. <<Depending on the reason goods are imported, different procedures are followed by ...
is my essay worth the pass mark1/22/2009
  Q: I've just written an essay and am unsure if it is worth at the pass mark which is 40%. I have had a ...
  A: I can look over your essay, but since I have no idea what your instructor's standards are I can't ...
HELP1/13/2009
  Q: I have just been assigned a English paper. I'm supposed to write a reflective essay, I'm not sure ...
  A: In general, a reflective essay should be a review of your thoughts about some specific project or ...
Dissertation - 2nd Final Edit12/31/2008
  Q: How do you cite an online quote in-text and how do you cite that info in work cited? Can't seem to ...
  A: The current MLA handbook does have instructions on that. Online sources vary widely, however, so you ...
could you please check my essay?12/29/2008
  Q: My name is Aylem and I would like to know if my essay really shows what they asking me for. the ...
  A: This is much longer than I can proof fully at no charge. You have some grammatical errors. Be ...
proofreading12/26/2008
  Q: Please help proofread the essay below and give me some advice. Oh no! It is Sunday night and I ...
  A: Oh no! It is Sunday night, and I just realized that I have a very important test on Monday! How am ...
english 100-research paper12/11/2008
  Q: I'm working on a research paper for my english class, and was wondering how do you cite a quote from ...
  A: Exactly how you do this depends on which style guide you are using. In general, however, you should ...
editing and proof reading12/7/2008
  Q: !! I have this essay to write. I have included the essay topic and the actual essay. The actual ...
  A: Thinking back now after three years, I still remember the faces of my fellow classmates. Some of ...
English11/29/2008
  Q: I have to write argumentative essay and i choose global warming as a topic could u take a look at ...
  A: You are incorrect on several grounds. Global warming first appeared as an issue more than 30 years ...
MLA In-text citation for an essay11/22/2008
  Q: What is the correct way to write an in-text citation for an essay that is in a book of essays by ...
  A: First, you start with the entry in the list of references. The essay should show the author's name ...
Please help me proofread11/20/2008
  Q: Please help me with proofreading the file below, I need to submit to apply to a position in my ...
  A: I am interested in the position of Vice President. It was a great experience in the past year to be ...
help editing11/19/2008
  Q: i have written out my body paragraph can you please take a look at it? Another reason why I feel ...
  A: The phrase, "set of system of belief" is redundant. Pick set or system and go with it. It should ...
introduction11/15/2008
  Q: sorry about that i forgot to include the introduction. Here it is: “Drums Along the Mohawk”, one of ...
  A: Try this: <<I will outline issues either engaged or ignored by Wood and the film's broader ...
Research Paper11/7/2008
  Q: I have a paper due at school and so far everyone at all experts has helped me a bunch. However I am ...
  A: This applies to sources of all kinds. If the author is given, it is correct to cite the author as ...
Paper for College Writing11/5/2008
  Q: Hey, writing a 16 to 20 page paper for College Writing, and I'm in my senior year of HS. It is ...
  A: A critical analysis is what it says it is. It analyses something using the methods of critical ...
Critiquing my essay?11/5/2008
  Q: I was wondering if you would be able to look at my introduction paragraph for my persuassive essay I ...
  A: This is a good start. I'd make a few minor revisions. Try this. Did you know that only about half ...
proofreading10/31/2008
  Q: Please help me proofread the essay below: In my opinion, wars are present all the time. ...
  A: larger, not huger. can destroy, not can destruct. Just use wisdom instead of "intelligence (or ...
Exchange application questions10/26/2008
  Q: I am a Senior in high school filling out an application to go on an exchange trip through my school. ...
  A: The only problem I see is at the end. You've made a sentence fragment. Use this. << Therefore, I'm ...
citing a book10/21/2008
  Q: I have a book that has no authors but has two editors. I have looked online and I don't know how to ...
  A: Treat them exactly as you would authors except that after their names put in parentheses (Eds.). The ...
Essay/Speech on Raw, Looking for Alibrandi and Adventures of Hucklebery Finn10/12/2008
  Q: I'm in year 10 and I was wondering if you could help me fix up my speech for english. I'd really ...
  A: All in all, your essay looks pretty good. Keep in mind these things. 1. Watch out for number ...
Citing director's commentary.9/17/2008
  Q: How should I reference a transcription I've taken from a dvds' directors' commentary when using the ...
  A: Well, I can hardly be expected to know of local university guides used in the UK and Australia, can ...
Citing director's commentary.9/17/2008
  Q: How should I reference a transcription I've taken from a dvds' directors' commentary when using the ...
  A: Again, there is no universally recognized Harvard referencing system. I don't care what your ...
Harvard system of bibliography9/10/2008
  Q: My Classical studies teacher has asked me to redo my bibliography. She has given me sheets of ...
  A: Harvard University does not publish a style guide for bibliographies that I am aware of (and I did a ...
Speech Assignment9/4/2008
  Q: I just started speech this year and my first assignment is to write a three minute speech on ...
  A: Well, my first idea is for you to actually go to school where you will have teachers who know about ...
Pride and Prejudice Paper8/31/2008
  Q: .. i am in english 10 honors Assignment Guidelines: I. Type a one page reflection that is not a ...
  A: For approximately a week and a half in late July, I read Pride and Prejudice, which I initially ...
afraid of writing8/8/2008
  Q: I love to write and was always top of my class in writing until my family moved to Puerto Rico. Once ...
  A: I think the most important thing you can do to improve your writing is to read good stuff. I always ...
rubri for persuasive essay7/24/2008
  Q: Smith I am an arabic language teacher from Lebanon.I need a rubric of writing a persuasive essay to ...
  A: I assume that by "rubric" you mean a model or organizational structure for a persuasive essay. For a ...
interview paper7/2/2008
  Q: i am a graduate student in psychology and have an assignment to write a paper on a personal ...
  A: I would add an introduction, but other than that, your instructor has told you how to write the ...
Medical School Personal Statement6/24/2008
  Q: I hear you are the guru of English. I was wondering if you can read my personal statement for ...
  A: Although the ultimate goal of a doctor is to treat the illness, equally critical tasks are to ...
writing a matrix? What the heck is that???5/24/2008
  Q: I have to do the following assignment and I have no idea what a matrix is! Help. b) English ...
  A: I can't set it up here because the formatting doesn't allow it. But what you need is a table with ...
APA citation5/15/2008
  Q: I am new to APA, and I have been asked to cite a presentation. There was a workshop with multiple ...
  A: Cite it as you would an article in a compilation of the proceedings of a scholarly conference. ...
Some questions about essay-writing in O level4/24/2008
  Q: I'm about to take my O Level this year, and I've found essay-writing part particularly worrying. ...
  A: A good argumentative essay should clearly introduce the topic and state a thesis. The thesis will be ...
APA citation for presentation4/24/2008
  Q: Smith, Thank for lending your expertise! I am a social work student working on my resume. I have ...
  A: I would format them with a hanging indent just as they would be formatted in an APA-style paper. ...
APA citation4/19/2008
  Q: I need to write an essay on a scientific paper that cites several other sources. Do I cite only the ...
  A: You should cite the author of the paper itself. If you think it is appropriate, you can note in your ...
Peace Corps application essay-14/3/2008
  Q: I am soon to be college grad submitting my application for the Peace Corps. To do so I must write 2 ...
  A: I cannot give a full proofreading of something this big, but will offer some suggestions. Watch out ...
MLA in text citation for gov't publication4/1/2008
  Q: I am working on a research paper. Here is the works cited info: United States. Dept. of Health & ...
  A: The general rule is that you must give enough information inside the parenthesis that the reader can ...
8th grade essay3/24/2008
  Q: My son, Jeffrey, turned in an essay and was marked down for the following: Jeffrey wrote: If you ...
  A: Jeffrey wrote: If you want to know important information about telegraph here are some facts. ...
Writing3/13/2008
  Q: I'm writing a short essay about a friend that envy's another. I was wondering where evny comes from, ...
  A: Wll, doggone it, Hana, if you can read about the antecedents of envy, you will learn something of ...
DISSERTATIONS3/1/2008
  Q: I'm researching a book to help doctoral candidates complete their dissertations. I'd like to know ...
  A: I am skeptical of a general work addressing the issue of completing a dissertation. Disciplines are ...
Essay for English class2/29/2008
  Q: I am a 10th grader and I have been given a essay to complete. I need to prove a quote by Aesop ...
  A: I cannot help with examples from the novel, because I have not read it. But.... I can help you ...
12 angry men essay2/25/2008
  Q: I am an 8th grader, and I am really confused on how to write this one essay. In school we watched ...
  A: If your assignment is to compare and contrast, you can show similarities, differences, or both. If ...
12 angry men essay2/25/2008
  Q: I am an 8th grader, and I am really confused on how to write this one essay. In school we watched ...
  A: It has been many years since I saw the movie, and I have only seen one version. I presume you mean ...
ask a question2/20/2008
  Q: how do i write an analysis of a poem by phillis wheatley
  A: First you must read the poem. Next, try looking the poem and the author up on the Internet and ...
Analysis Essay2/18/2008
  Q: I need to write an analysis on the movie "The Seven Year Itch" I don't know where to start or what ...
  A: Have you watched the movie? If not, do so. The movie is a comedy, but it addresses a serious ...
english2/14/2008
  Q: I am trying to write a persuasive essay trying to persuade my family to go on a vacation i have to ...
  A: You did not actually ask me a question, so the best I can do is assume you would like me to outline ...
research paper on euthanasia2/7/2008
  Q: I'm a first year college student and it's my first doing a research paper. I have no clue on where ...
  A: You begin a research paper by doing the research. Your thesis statement should be in the ...
social studies project/identity2/3/2008
  Q: For a project i have to look up my name and its origin, ect. My name is Diana. Did the name Diana ...
  A: Wikipedia has an entry that appears to be a good starting point for your research. While it is not ...
hr project2/3/2008
  Q: I am a human resource management student and have to write a paper. I have to provide written ...
  A: A narrative tells a story from beginning to end. Without knowing what the questions are, I can't ...
Writting a paper2/2/2008
  Q: I have a paper that is due and i don't know how to get started. The essay that i have to read is ...
  A: I am already familiar with the concept, though I am not certain I have read this essay. But here is ...
cover letter language instructor2/1/2008
  Q: i am need help in writing the body of my cover letter for a position as a language instructor. I ...
  A: Try this. You were already off to a good start. <<Although I lack classroom teaching experience, I ...
senior project on holocaust1/31/2008
  Q: hi i am doing my senior project on the holocaust and my research and everythng has been good i just ...
  A: The introduction to any subject should establish why the topic is worth reading about. What is ...
global studies1/28/2008
  Q: I am a 9th grader in high school and I have just been assigned a big project. The project is an ...
  A: E-mail me directly at: dan@wordsmithofaustin.com I'll give you a table you can use. This showed ...
senior project english1/20/2008
  Q: I need some ideas for a senior project in english. I was going to write about how to become a ...
  A: Your project should be on something that interests you. If you are interested in how to become a ...
APA format for dissertations1/15/2008
  Q: I am typing a dissertation for a graduate nursing student. She has supplied me with the content and ...
  A: This is obviously your first dissertation, and you're in a bit over your head. Still, if you are a ...
help for writing essays12/31/2007
  Q: .i need help ,or rather tips for good writing skills..most of the time i am not satisfied with ...
  A: Here is my suggestion. Stop using your e-mails to practice writing poorly. Use proper capitalization ...
APA style writing12/20/2007
  Q: Dan, I have been out of college for about 10 years and I am beginning Graduate School. I need a ...
  A: You need a book. Its title is "Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association, 5th ...
senior project12/18/2007
  Q: i have to do a senior project but i don't know where to start or what my idea is yet. him interested ...
  A: Since you didn't tell me what the specifications are for a senior project, I can't offer much in the ...
essay help/info ??12/15/2007
  Q: everything is ok however the only fly in the ointment is ive been asked to write an essay ?? ive ...
  A: I can give you editorial or tutorial assistance with this on any of several levels and will be happy ...
online job for preparing test papers12/7/2007
  Q: I am Aman Kapoor, a commerce graduate from an Indian University and I want to do a job for preparing ...
  A: The fields in which you want to work are outside my expertise. But I have generated a fair amount of ...
online job for preparing test papers12/6/2007
  Q: I am Aman Kapoor, a commerce graduate from an Indian University and I want to do a job for preparing ...
  A: I am not sure what your request is, but if it has to do with helping students in their studies I ...
Chapter 111/28/2007
  Q: After my thesis readjustment I have now begun to write my 1st chapter. given my title and thesis ...
  A: Let's do this directly through my e-mail from now on. It's much easier to work in Word than in this ...
pls help rate and critique thesis statement11/27/2007
  Q: PROJECT TITLE: AN ENVIRONMENTAL MANAGEMENT PLAN FOR THE LOWER LIESBEEK (LL) THESIS: IN ORDER TO ...
  A: TO ACHIEVE A SUSTAINABLY WORKING PARK, THERE IS A NEED TO STRATEGICALLY MANAGE THE TWO RIVERS URBAN ...
BEE11/23/2007
  Q: I am in the 7th grade and am going to my school geography bee. I plan to talking to my Social ...
  A: A good place to start learning about individual countries is the CIA World Factbook. ...
Plants and Music11/20/2007
  Q: Does music effect plants growth? If so, which kind of music?
  A: I would be awfully surprised to learn that music affects plant growth. But I do not know of any ...
an epilogue to this story called "Dame Van Winkle." Describe her response to Rip's disappearance.11/19/2007
  Q: Once poor Dame van wrinkle stopped grieving about her husbands disappearance she gained the courage ...
  A: I assume you would like me to correct this. You should not ask for this kind of help unless you have ...
Current Events11/15/2007
  Q: I have a Question that I will wish you can answer me well, This is my first year studying at USA so ...
  A: "Current event" generally refers to something that is in the news right now. Among the things that ...
Help!11/12/2007
  Q: I have a paper i need to write compairing three character and I don't know how to begin...I do have ...
  A: Let me be honest. I am not at all convinced this is a "disorder." I think it is just not knowing ...
character analysis11/8/2007
  Q: I am having trouble stating my character analysis can you give me some pointers
  A: Not without more information. What character are you analyzing? Keep in mind that my expertise is ...
Reference citations11/5/2007
  Q: I just finished writing a report in the APA style. I am supposed to cite various sources and I'm not ...
  A: When there is no author information, use the title as the first part of the entry and alphabetize it ...
college essay11/4/2007
  Q: Dan. Currently, I'm writing a college essay for my senior transitions class. The topic for my ...
  A: There are logical problems from the very beginning. How can life be "unexpected"? You are alive, so ...
writing an analysis paper11/3/2007
  Q: I have been asked to write an analysis paper on 3 websites that I am required to view on situational ...
  A: I would begin by briefly describing the sites and their content. Since I don't have any idea about ...
writing a narrative10/25/2007
  Q: how do i write a narrative on basketball i don't know how at all
  A: To begin with, you start each sentence with a capital letter. If you ask a question, you end the ...
paper10/25/2007
  Q: why people commit suicide and why is religion so prevelant but those topics can be made into ...
  A: Yes. Note that the beginning word in each sentence should be capitalized and that all sentences end ...
What to think about......10/21/2007
  Q: I'm just wondering what should I think about when I write an essay about "social criticism" of a ...
  A: This is not really an area of expertise for me, but I'd suggest you read the Wikipedia article on ...
diabetes insipidus10/10/2007
  Q: Can you help me on my research. i want to know who discovered diabetes insipidus. i search online ...
  A: I don't know that either, and didn't have any luck with an online search. I did discover a Diabetes ...
my english speech10/10/2007
  Q: this is what we were suppose to do: Speaking Task: What issues are addressed in To Kill A ...
  A: I don't have a problem with your wording. Perhaps I might have worded things a bit differently here ...
history world war 110/5/2007
  Q: why do countries need empires?
  A: Empires are kind of a thing of the past, but during the age of empire they served several purposes: ...
research paper10/5/2007
  Q: I'm holping you can help me. I'm a college student, criminal justice major. In my "Crimianl ...
  A: What a stupid professor you have! Just because you could write a whole (or several) on this topic, ...
u.s history10/3/2007
  Q: i really need help with my school project and it's due tomorrow and i haven't found useful ...
  A: There were multiple motives, of course, but greed was certainly among them. Probably the most ...
Profile essay9/26/2007
  Q: I have to write a profile essay on a person that I barely know, this is an assignment from my ...
  A: If you can talk to the person a bit, do so. Ask about the things the person likes. What parents are ...
help9/16/2007
  Q: I don't know how to start my essay Evaluate the relative importance of the following factors ...
  A: Try this. Among the reasons the American colonists revolted were parliamentary taxation, ...
write an essay to get scholarship9/15/2007
  Q: My name's Nidhi. i graduated from high school and now I'm going to attend college in about 1 week. I ...
  A: I would guess that you will have to show financial need and that you have the capability of using it ...
internal thoughts9/7/2007
  Q: Should internal thoughts be in quotation marks, italicized, or plain text?
  A: I am not aware of a formal convention for expressing internal thoughts, but I am not a fiction ...
suggestions for character analysis? (revisited)8/22/2007
  Q: Well, since the the download was unsuccessful, I thought I should just post all of it here. I'm ...
  A: The big thing I notice is that you are writing to impress rather than to communicate. This leads you ...
help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!8/16/2007
  Q: .................... I AM SHIVANI FROM INDIA.I AM 14 YRS OLD & STUDIES IN 10 CLASS.I AM VERY ...
  A: I can encourage you, but I cannot help you manage it directly. Let me make a suggestion, though. ...
Essay help8/15/2007
  Q: I have to write an essay on a book I read that argues whether the book is a classic or not. However, ...
  A: The term "classic" can have many different meanings. See, for example, the Wikipedia entry on ...
help!7/31/2007
  Q: i was wondering..what is the best way to study for english..apart from reading books because i have ...
  A: Reading is by far the best way. But read good stuff; while you may read the sports, business, and ...
proofreading7/27/2007
  Q: I am a student from China. Please help me proofread my essay below: I think that the best way to ...
  A: I think that the best way to prepare for any important test is to preview, study, and review. This ...
history(wording).....kinna7/24/2007
  Q: How do i transform an introduction into a thought provoking question that allow varies ...
  A: I can't think of a general answer to this question. If I knew the topic, I might be able to suggest ...
Death Penalty6/27/2007
  Q: I came up with a thesis on the death penalty. I need to know if it is good, if not how can I ...
  A: I assume your thesis is saying you intend to explore both sides of the argument in your paper. Try ...
ASAP!6/6/2007
  Q: I'm doing a speech. The speech is mainly directed to a girl who is turning 16. y topic is to wish ...
  A: Haven't you learned by now that 16-year-olds are impervious to impact by adult speakers? This one ...
MLA/APA citation question5/19/2007
  Q: I'm working on a biography of my grandfather who lived from 1889-1973. It's not a true scholarly ...
  A: Your last sentence pretty much says that you are aware of the final standard: that others be able to ...
Debate5/17/2007
  Q: My name is Hula and tomorrow is a big day. Tomorrow, May 18, I'm going on a debate competition and I ...
  A: Well, now, I haven't been researching this, and you should have been for your debate. But I have ...
Debate5/17/2007
  Q: My name is Hula and tomorrow is a big day. Tomorrow, May 18, I'm going on a debate competition and I ...
  A: The negative, even in the constructive speeches is, by definition, a response to the affirmative. ...
essay help4/19/2007
  Q: .my name is diana and i am working on a rewrite for my bio lab class. I was just wondering if you ...
  A: This is a bigger piece than I can do a full edit on at no charge. If you would like to have me do a ...
essay4/13/2007
  Q: can you reed my essay? well here it is. Many European countries during the 17th and 18th ...
  A: This is beginning to be more work than I can do for nothing. You seen to be off on a good start, ...
essay4/13/2007
  Q: can you reed my essay? well here it is. Many European countries during the 17th and 18th ...
  A: Well, colonization is not really the outcome. It is the proximate cause of some bad things, but not ...
essay4/13/2007
  Q: can you reed my essay? well here it is. Many European countries during the 17th and 18th ...
  A: You have some careless misspellings such as "daises" for "diseases," and some equally careless ...
slavery research paper4/3/2007
  Q: i only have one day left to complete a 5 page research paper and outline on slavery. i cant find ...
  A: Slavery has been written about as much as any subject in history. To say you can't find anything ...
APA style reference3/31/2007
  Q: Smith, I am working on a reference list for an article review and I'm wondering if you can help ...
  A: To begin with, you do not "site" it. You "cite" it. Cite it as you would any other Web site. The ...
English Comp3/30/2007
  Q: I am trying to write in a active voice. When I write "Jigs can be used in many different types of ...
  A: There are places in which passive voice is appropriate. This is one of them. About the only way to ...
MLA format3/28/2007
  Q: I was searching for how to cite a movie in MLA format. I was cracking up when i read your response ...
  A: If you have to work in MLA format very often the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers, 6th ...
Persuasive Essay due Tuesday!3/17/2007
  Q: I have a persuasive essay (draft) due this Tuesday and have no idea what to write. I have researched ...
  A: The thesis is obvious: "Children should be protected from online predators." That's it. And a lot ...
starting an essay3/14/2007
  Q: I have to write an essay but I don't know how to start/ how to approch it. It there a way or ...
  A: A good bit has been written about the language and nationalistic divisions in Canada between the ...
Business Studies (work/life balance dissertation)3/13/2007
  Q: i hope ur fine and well,I am a final yr University Student, my question concerns a topic area of ...
  A: I think your big problem will be in finding too much rather than too little material. To be sure ...
why?3/2/2007
  Q: I asked a question on here and the response I received was rather short and rude, I am wandering ...
  A: Of course, I don't know what the original answer was, but my own answer would be that you should ...
memo writing2/8/2007
  Q: I fired an employee who was insubordinate. As a result , I assigned responsibilities in my ...
  A: Your memo should not mention the discharged employee at all. That is between you and that employee, ...
thesis2/4/2007
  Q: I already did research on the paper and I had a good thesis sentence, but I was not sure if I can ...
  A: That is not a thesis statement. That is a thesis question. Take a side, make it a statement, and ...
Can you please help me?1/31/2007
  Q: I have failed this test and i cant find the answers. Will you please help me by answering some of ...
  A: 3. Which one of the following sentences is written in the active voice? B. however, few people ...
thesis1/31/2007
  Q: Sorry to bother you again, but what do you mean? can you give me some examples and possibly a thesis ...
  A: No. I can't write your thesis sentence for you. I haven't researched the topic in any detail at all. ...
thesis1/30/2007
  Q: I have a 25 page thesis due in a month. I was given the apparel industry by my professsor. What ...
  A: The thing that comes to mind for me is the way the apparel industry has become almost entirely a ...
"Critical Lens" paper1/17/2007
  Q: My daughter is a Sophomore at a Long Island Public School. She is taking an Honors English class and ...
  A: Please send it to me directly as an attachment in Microsoft Word or as a text file if you do not ...
Revise short answers for admissions1/12/2007
  Q: Could you please take to the time and revise this for me. Thanks! A. Write about your academic ...
  A: A. Write about your academic interests and the personal or academic ezperiences that have led to or ...
help1/12/2007
  Q: i'm a class 10 student(age 15) and i've got my board exams this year. in our english lang. paper ...
  A: Since you read a great deal, I doubt you will have any difficulty with the essays. Your question to ...
Evaluation test1/9/2007
  Q: Sorry if this question is not in the correct category, but I need help. I recently moved to Toronto ...
  A: I'm sorry. I am in the United States and am not at all familiar with these tests. I would take them ...
492 word college application essay, can you please proofread1/7/2007
  Q: I don't have a long essay or anything but I would greatly appreciate if you can give me a quick ...
  A: The "not only" construction is generally a weak one. Use it very sparingly, and almost never to ...
integral calculus1/5/2007
  Q: why is integral calculus important to the math world and how does it apply outside of math? how is ...
  A: This sounds like a homework question. But in general, integral calculus is used to describe in ...
Citing movies1/3/2007
  Q: I am writing a essay and I have to have a works cited page. What is the structure for citing movies?
  A: It depends on the style manual you are using. If movies are involved, I would assume you have been ...
Thesis Concerns (sorry forgot to attach)12/19/2006
  Q: Smith, I'm writing an English 111 paper and I have a few concerns about my introduction paragraph. ...
  A: In William Faulkner’s short story, “A Rose for Emily,” we are presented with a barrage of ...
Learning to write12/18/2006
  Q: I am on my winter break and despite being a couple years into college I feel like I am severely ...
  A: Actually, my recommendation is that you NOT get any book on writing. Instead, over the holidays, ...
English homework12/16/2006
  Q: Hey Dan, I am in grade 9 and I have english this semester. How can I improve my English mark?
  A: Two ways: Read. Read a lot, and read good stuff. For short pieces that are usually well written, ...
short essay12/14/2006
  Q: My name is Liza and I am a student at Carleton College. I am applying for internships this summer. ...
  A: I’ve known my whole life that I wanted to go to college. My mom was first generation, finishing her ...
Challenging Thesis12/2/2006
  Q: I have to list five sub-claims that will support my thesis. My thesis is "Family history of Breast ...
  A: If you don't have five sub-claims to support your thesis, you will have to do some research and find ...
Mediation essay12/1/2006
  Q: My assignment is to write a mediation essay that mediates between an argumentative essay and its ...
  A: Gee. Teachers are coming up with so many different variations on the essay theme that it is almost ...
eng comp II11/29/2006
  Q: I wanted to know if Tiresia(antigone by Sophocles) is a hubris and if so in modern or Greek sense. I ...
  A: Well, "hubris" is "excessive pride or arrogance." Thus, it is a quality of character. A person or ...
Essays11/20/2006
  Q: I am an 8th grade student, Average, and my teacher has been talking about using mla format with like ...
  A: My goodness! She's getting you off to an early start. Good for her! MLA refers to the Modern ...
book report11/17/2006
  Q: i am writing a book report and I was wondering if you could edit what I wrote so far. As you can ...
  A: Adesso! An Introduction to Italian provides students with a clear, simple and successful way of ...
historiography11/17/2006
  Q: I'm a junior in college. I am in the process of writing a historiography paper on Southern ...
  A: Well, I grew up in the middle of it, but it's not really an area of expertise. But organizing papers ...
agricultural productivity11/17/2006
  Q: hello dan smith how can agricultural productivity be enhanced in nigeria
  A: Almost any productivity can be enhanced in Nigeria if the delusional fools will stop fighting over ...
scientific analysis11/16/2006
  Q: I was just wondering if you could give me a hand with an essay i have to write for a university ...
  A: Well, the first thing I would have to do is read u on the Dunham Technique and find out what it is. ...
MLA ESSAY ?????11/10/2006
  Q: This is my first year in high school and I've never had to right an essay. This is my first time ...
  A: You WRITE essays. You do not "right" them. Be careful about that sort of thing. MLA stands for ...
Contemporary Art Theory since 198511/9/2006
  Q: My assignment is to write an essay as though I had entered into a discussion regarding one subtopic ...
  A: If I understand corrected, you are to read five different essays on a topic, each expressing a ...
Vietnam War Help11/6/2006
  Q: I have this HUGE Vietnam War research paper due, and I don't really know what to begin on ...
  A: Why not research the early history of the war? How the United States got involved to begin with. An ...
speaker critique11/3/2006
  Q: Could you tell me how to do a paper on critiquing an outside speaker?
  A: Do you want to write a critique of an outside speaker or do you want to write a paper about how to ...
Essay/Thesis statement10/29/2006
  Q: I would like to thank you for your time and consideration in answering my question. I really do ...
  A: I answered the question the way I did because of your dishonesty in calling the party the Democrat ...
Essay/Thesis statement10/29/2006
  Q: I am in my 1st year of college after spending the last 13 years serving in the Army. needless to ...
  A: Who the devil wrote your question? That person should be shot because he or she does not know the ...
Thesis Issue - Getting Mother's Body?10/27/2006
  Q: My name is Laura and I'm trying, rather in vain, to come up with a thesis for the book Getting ...
  A: You've an advantage on me; you've read the book. Decide what central thing you want to say about the ...
identity theft10/26/2006
  Q: what is identity theft?
  A: Identify theft is when someone gains access to enough personal information about another person to ...
english10/25/2006
  Q: How can i improve my conventions, what should i pay more attention to to improve them and is there a ...
  A: You can begin by practicing writing as well as you can every time you sit down at the keyboard. I ...
Essay critique10/23/2006
  Q: I have written an essay critiquing the essay by George Orwell - "Shooting an Elephant." Could u ...
  A: This is a longer piece than I can do at no charge. I limit my free work to 1 double-spaced page, ...
edit the grammar10/22/2006
  Q: I don't have a credit card so I can't have you edit my essay. thanks anyway Balint
  A: OK. Go ahead and send me the full essay directly. dan@wordsmith@austin.rr.com If I can have a ...
edit the grammar10/21/2006
  Q: I am writing an application essay to study library science. I would like to know if you can correct ...
  A: Although it needs some minor grammatical fixes, the major problem is structural. You ask them to ...
Citing an allexperts.com response10/16/2006
  Q: So, the citation for this interview would be: Smith, Dan. Online interview. "Citing an ...
  A: That should do it. Very good. I doubt you will find an exact example in the MLA stylebook to cover ...
Citing an allexperts.com response10/15/2006
  Q: I am working on a high school science fair project. As part of my research, I asked some questions ...
  A: Give the expert's name and the site (allexperts.com). Provide the URL for that expert. In the text, ...
Essays10/14/2006
  Q: ------------------------- That is the full question and the incredibles is a movie and "After ...
  A: Ok. I have not seen the movie or read the short story, so that's about as far as I can take it. But ...
Essays10/14/2006
  Q: Hi my name is Renee and im in yr 7 and for english we have to right up 1 or 2 essays that are 1000 ...
  A: First of all, you have to WRITE the essays, not "right" them. To answer your question, I would ...
English Composition10/2/2006
  Q: ...For an essay in English 101, I wrote in short, choppy sentences intentionally to show action, ...
  A: I think it is too choppy. While I understand your attempt to show action in this way, I think it ...
Composition10/1/2006
  Q: .. Will you pleae tell me if I would have to do a citation (with page number included), a ...
  A: It depends on which style guide you are using. Since this is an English course, I would assume MLA. ...
How to write9/26/2006
  Q: My name is Megan and I'm into my second year in college. I'm taking a basic writing class and my ...
  A: Well, the instructor has given you the pieces of the essay, so do what you're told. The introduction ...
summary essay9/24/2006
  Q: Hey I have edited my essay and this is the final draft which I have incorporated your suggestions. ...
  A: In the second paragraph, "generally associated WITH geography". I generally find the use of "map" ...
proof read9/24/2006
  Q: Robert Munch is one of my favourite all time children’s authors. One of my favourite children’s book ...
  A: The punctuation is OK, but you need to be careful of tense. Keep it in the past tense until you get ...
summary essay9/23/2006
  Q: I am a first year university student at Queen's university. I am taking first year technical ...
  A: Generally pretty well written, but watch out for inappropriate changes of tense. Your paragraph ...
composition9/21/2006
  Q: Could you comment on this? Title: A reunion with three friends from schooldays in 10 years’ time. ...
  A: You're being careless. Don't change tenses. Since it is something that happened in the past, let it ...
Choosing a unique title for my essay9/21/2006
  Q: Well thanks but i dont kno who Spiro Agnew is thoughThank you anyways...I guess I will just go with ...
  A: The late Spiro Agnew was Richard Nixon's first Vice President. He was known for his use of ...
Speaking9/19/2006
  Q: I had to give a speech recently. I stumbled over my mouth something terrible. Afterward someone ...
  A: Toastmasters is an organization dedicated to helping people give presentations more effectively. It ...
GCE O level paper9/13/2006
  Q: Would you comment on this essay? title: Dreams Every one of us has our own dreams. Be it to ...
  A: Well, it does need an edit by a native English speaker. However, it is about twice the amount of ...
history help9/9/2006
  Q: i'm 15, in yr 10 and live in nsw,australia.i recently went on a school excursion to the australian ...
  A: Freedom is a good one and the most important. The Allies (Australia was one) were fighting to assure ...
Intoduction Statement/Thesis8/26/2006
  Q: I am about to enroll in a master's level program and part of the process is writing an essay paper. ...
  A: It is permissible but generally not a good idea, if for no other reason that it is dull. Go directly ...
APA Dissertation Chapter headings8/15/2006
  Q: Are chapter headings always to be written in all capital letters, or are they ONLY to be in all caps ...
  A: See APA Manual 5.10. Level 1 headings are all caps only if there are 5 levels. But, this is a ...
GCE O level paper8/11/2006
  Q: Would you mind to comment on this essay in terms of grammer, sentence strutures and use of language? ...
  A: You're using words in ways no native speaker would. Also, you do not understand articles, tenses, ...
Reference8/9/2006
  Q: I recently attended a 2 day seminar sponsored by Florida Gold Coast Chapter of AACN (American ...
  A: If you are going to give highlights of each presentation you attended, you might do a title slide ...
admission essay-2(Post-study plan)7/24/2006
  Q: It is me again,here is my post study plan for my apply. please also point out the incorret and ...
  A: I have taken a look at both your questions. This is far more work than I can do at no charge. I ...
admission essay-1(study plan)7/24/2006
  Q: my school asked me to write a study plan for my apply.I would like to get your word and comments on ...
  A: I have taken a look at both your questions. This is far more work than I can do at no charge. I ...
how to write a speach to deliver7/19/2006
  Q: I would be more than grateful to your help if you cuold provide me with some hints at how to write ...
  A: You will probably be introduced by the host, and there will probably be brief biographical ...
INTERNET CAN NEVER REPLACE BOOKS-DEBATE7/3/2006
  Q: Good Evening Sir. My Name is Nafeesa, and i am from India, Asia. I am 13 years old and i am in ...
  A: The first help I'm going to offer you is this suggestion: don't think it is acceptable to use typing ...
Need help on how to edit essays, thanks.6/27/2006
  Q: Please review my essay. The Three Names of Freedom this is the body of my essay, ...
  A: Briana, I limit my pro bono editing to the equivalent of one typewritten page, double-spaced. This ...
Research paper6/13/2006
  Q: I'm writing a research paper for which I need to include both endnotes and a bibliography. I'm not ...
  A: Different stylesheets differ a bit, but this looks OK to me. Endnotes are just like footnotes ...
CYC and the common sense problem5/30/2006
  Q: ) I have a school work with theme: "CYC and the common sense problem". It must be 10 pages or more. ...
  A: I did a quick Google search on "CYC" and turned up a number of sites, but for a school paper you ...
English Essay part 35/27/2006
  Q: Here is the 4th and 5th paragraph of my essay. Practicing the 3 Rs: reducing, reusing, and ...
  A: Practicing the 3 Rs can also have some disadvantages. Sometimes it is ineffective and useless, and ...
English Essay part 35/27/2006
  Q: Here is the 3rd paragraph of my essay. We are recycling, reducing, and reusing not only to protect ...
  A: We are recycling, reducing, and reusing not only to protect the environment, but for economic ...
English Essay part 25/27/2006
  Q: Here is the 2nd paragraph of my essay. Environmentally aware consumers are producing less waste by ...
  A: Environmentally aware consumers are producing less waste by practicing the 3Rs: recycling, reducing, ...
English Essay5/27/2006
  Q: I wrote an english personal persuasive essay. My topic was "Recycling, reducing, and reusing is a ...
  A: Here's 1. <<As long as there were few people and they did not use energy-intensive technologies, we ...
Project on scope of Homescience5/24/2006
  Q: Respected sir I am a student of class Ix . I have to write an eassy on "Scope of Homescience" . But ...
  A: I have no idea what it is either. The only suggestion I can offer is that you ask your instructor ...
Help On Citing A Source....4/16/2006
  Q: Smith, I quoted something directly off of a website, and I am using MLA format. What do I put ...
  A: The current MLA style manual has that information, and if you are using MLA you should have it. That ...
The right word3/31/2006
  Q: I am trying to find the write word for my thesis. I am writing about how parents are the best ...
  A: "the WRITE word"? Thesis: "Parents are the key to preventing obesity in children." Good luck. By ...
Block Quotes in APA Style3/27/2006
  Q: I'm writing a literature review and using the APA style. I have a block quote, which according to ...
  A: Do not indent the continuation fo the paragraph if it is truly that. There is a certain amount of ...
english comp 23/2/2006
  Q:
  A: I am not already familiar with this work. For me to offer substantive help, I would have to read it. ...
How to Write An Analysis?3/2/2006
  Q: I wasn't quite sure who to ask but I thought you might be knowledgeable =) I have a written ...
  A: Well, the phrasing is a little unusual, but I would assume that it would be simply a research paper ...
Research Paper2/26/2006
  Q: I am transitioning my 61 12th graders into a research project which should result in a quality ...
  A: Yes. A couple. 1. The debate about global warming and its anthropomorphic genesis is one that is ...
Payment for services2/16/2006
  Q: What do you charge for your services. I am looking for someone to write my assigment for my Ph.d in ...
  A: I may be able to help with this. Write to me directly at dan@wordsmithofaustin.com with the full ...
Edgar Allen Poe Term Paper Introduction2/9/2006
  Q: I need help on how to begin my term paper, over Edgar Allen Poe and his writings.
  A: First, read some of Poe's poems and short stories. Second, read some of the many online sources ...
The body of a research paper2/6/2006
  Q: I am doing a research paper on a person in my American History class. I have not wrote a paper in ...
  A: The body of the paper is where you make the major parts. I'm assuming this is some kind of ...
Ref: citing sources1/14/2006
  Q: Good day, I am in the processing of compiling a directory in print. Some of the information included ...
  A: Any time you use someone else's work, if you are honest, you must give sufficient information in the ...
English Essay1/1/2006
  Q: and i wrote an character analysis essay. can u help me correct my essay up and help me make it ...
  A: Don't practice writing poorly in your e-mails. I am not a "u". To you, I am a "you". Use proper ...
Need a writing jobs12/29/2005
  Q: I want to do online writing job. I can write essay on Islam, Accounting and Urdu Language.I have a ...
  A: I don't have any idea of the demand for writers on Islam or of the demand for writers in the Urdu ...
General Paper12/20/2005
  Q: Sir, Would you like to tell me about globalisation.
  A: That's a very big topic. Any particular aspect of it? In general, it has to do with the growing ...
report12/12/2005
  Q: Yes my question is what are the mian questions that should be answered in a paper?
  A: Well, it would help to know what the specfic assignment is, but in general: 1. What is the topic ...
Annex12/11/2005
  Q: how do i make an Annex
  A: Surely you mean an appendix? On the page after the end of your article, type "APPENDIX" at the top. ...
Hemingway Essay12/11/2005
  Q: I am required to write an essay on the book i have just completed, "A farewell to arms" by earnest ...
  A: This is not an area of special expertise for me. It has been my practice when I have to do this sort ...
Capitalization11/30/2005
  Q: I am writing a Professional Statement for a college and am not too sure whether or not the word ...
  A: Only proper nouns should be capitalized. Names of occupations are not proper nouns. If the term is ...
college essay question11/23/2005
  Q: I'm applying for a scholarship and must do this essay prompt with about 500 words. However, I have ...
  A: My, my. I would be surprised if the person who wrote it had much of an idea. But here it is and you ...
Essay11/9/2005
  Q: Your question was My name is Brandon and I am in the 10th grade. I go to a private school where ...
  A: You will be pleased to note that your question is written better than 99 per cent of the questions I ...
Reference page in APA format11/8/2005
  Q: I have read the references section in my APA book and I still do not understand how I need the ...
  A: I can't really show you formats in this venue. It just displays plain text. Follow the formatting in ...
Narative interview writing11/3/2005
  Q: I am writing a narative interview paper and I am having trouble getting started, how do you write a ...
  A: A narrative is a story, and stories generally start at the beginning and go to the end. I am not ...
Fracturing Stories10/29/2005
  Q: What would be a good way to fracture the fairytale, "Cinderella"?
  A: You might make the glass slipper fit one of the stepsisters AND Cinderella, thus confusing the ...
Edit Work10/25/2005
  Q: im a second year college student. We are suppose to write an essay on a feminist perspective on the ...
  A: This is a much longer essay than I can edit at no charge. I generally limit my free editing to one ...
revision number 2 what u think about it this time10/20/2005
  Q: sorry to bother u but i put time and thought into it this time but i still want to know what you ...
  A: You're still being careless. Look at the first sentence of your last paragraph. "According to ...
revision grammar am i heading in the right direction10/19/2005
  Q: Forum: DISCUSSION FORUM 1 Date: Fri Oct 14 2005 12:29 Author: Allen, Terre <tallen@csulb.edu> ...
  A: You're being careless, Terri, and submitting this to me before you've gone back over it yourself. In ...
Personal Statement10/16/2005
  Q: This is my personal statement for a undergraduate college entrance application. I was wondering how ...
  A: My interest in science and math, coupled with a desire to follow in my father's footsteps, prompted ...
Speech10/13/2005
  Q: i have to do a speech on how pop and RnB are different i was wondering if you know ?
  A: Try these links for starters: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rhythm_and_blues ...
writing a paper10/5/2005
  Q: I just need advice. I had to interview people about cherished beliefs, not what their cherished ...
  A: I should think that if your thesis (really what you conclude based on the evidence you have) grows ...
math9/27/2005
  Q: why is it that most college student meet difficulties in coping math subject?
  A: This seems an unlikely question to ask someone who is volunteering as an expert on writing. Why are ...
Paper Topics9/13/2005
  Q: I am taking a master's level class called The Psychology of Science. I am a senior, but this is ...
  A: It is usually phrased "evolutionary psychology," and despite its relatively new status, there is a ...
MLA Citations9/11/2005
  Q: My question is: If I only used one source for my paper, do I still need an extra page for a citation ...
  A: If your instructor has not given you explicit instructions on how to format it, be safe and give it ...
Writing an autobiography8/9/2005
  Q: I have an assignment on autobiography, which I have never written one before. I need to pick a time ...
  A: An autobiography is a story of one's own life. It sounds to me, though, as if your assignment is to ...
Rhetorical Modes in Essay Writing7/27/2005
  Q: In beginning to write 2 essays in different rhetorical modes, I am unsure in what person to word ...
  A: I think you will find this site helpful. http://www.daltonstate.edu/esl/Rhetorical%20Modes.htm In ...
multimedia the master of mind7/13/2005
  Q: i am a 10 grade student i have to write a debate preferably for the motion on the topic -multimedia ...
  A: If I were you, I would do both Internet and library searches on the term itself. There will be many ...
multimedia the master of mind7/13/2005
  Q: i am a 10 grade student i have to write a debate preferably for the motion on the topic -multimedia ...
  A: Can you give me the actual phrasing of the proposition? This is not enough information for me to ...
Can you edit my paper7/11/2005
  Q: can you edit my summary please, Thank You Independent Contractor and Businesses Association (ICBA), ...
  A: Try this: <<The Independent Contractor and Businesses Association (ICBA), British Columbia's ...
Can you edit my paper7/6/2005
  Q: Can you help me edit my progress report. I want to know if I did it right. Thank You Normanford ...
  A: I can't tell a lot about the formatting in this venue, but that looks OK to me. I found a few minor ...
Can you edit my paper6/29/2005
  Q: Can you help me edit my memo. I want to know if I did it right. Thank You 1) DATE: June 5, ...
  A: Effective Friday, June 7, employees will join me at an expense-paid, one-day retreat designed to ...
------------------------- hello thank...6/10/2005
  Q: ------------------------- hello thank you for your reply.sir i am under graduate in class 12 i am ...
  A: I think your best bet would be to find out what texts or other reading materials are used in the ...
hi! I am a student in asia...6/8/2005
  Q: I am a student in asia after finishing my college i am getting admission in BBA IT.As to see what ...
  A: I'd like to help, but your question is not clear to me. What exactly are you trying to accomplish? ...
Can you edit my paper6/6/2005
  Q: Can you help me edit my sales letter. I want to know if I did it right. Thank You Promoting a ...
  A: MAY WE INTRODUCE YOU TO---- Colleen Williams, Manager of Toni's newest and most unusual specialty ...
can you help me5/23/2005
  Q: can you help me edit memo.. the first on is inquiry letter and the second one is response. Thank ...
  A: 1. inquiry letter 314 Murray Hill Crescent Mississauga, ON L5G 2M6 May 19, 2005. Ms. Marion Lamp ...
revising my grammar5/18/2005
  Q: i would u hear what u think about my paper and helping with grammar thanks According to Britney805 ...
  A: I thought I had already answered this, but here it is again. This is more than I can take on until ...
Speech5/18/2005
  Q: I have a speech for my english class,& I need some info on mail,e-mail& junk mail Thanks alot
  A: You can share with them my experience as a small business. All I have to sell is my time, and junk ...
need help in citing5/12/2005
  Q: Besides quotes and figures/numbers, when should I cite my sources?
  A: You should cite the source whenever you use anyone else's ideas, even if you do not quote them ...
persuasive essay5/8/2005
  Q: i am a college student( first year) and I have to write a persuasive essay due next week. i wrote an ...
  A: Yes. This is persuasive. You are attempting to convince the reader of a particular argument. I ...
dissertation5/5/2005
  Q: i have written my dissertation on stress at work as part of my pharmacy course and i would be very ...
  A: Please send a few sample pages to me at dan@wordsmithofaustin.com. I like to see how heavy an edit ...
Dissertation5/4/2005
  Q: I am currently writing my dissetation as arequirment for MPharm course. Unfortunatley i am unable to ...
  A: Yes. For a project that size, of course, there is a fee. Please e-mail me a few pages (include the ...
Online Homework Helpers4/30/2005
  Q: I would like your opinion on a website that lets middle school students do/submit their homework ...
  A: I have no problem with the concept in principle. One thing to keep in mind is that information reads ...
The Renaissance and Petrarch4/29/2005
  Q: What were Petrarch's most important accomplishments during the Renaissance? More specifically, what ...
  A: It was Petrarch's love of writing and his eagerness to explore history and literature that werre his ...
Where can I get live tutoring...4/24/2005
  Q: Where can I get live tutoring help on an essay, am stressed out I may fail my college class. Let me ...
  A: Many colleges and universities have writing centers that you can turn to. Investigate that, of ...
Hi my name is Jackie and my...4/19/2005
  Q: I-search is an essay to teach the 7th graders how to do research. My topic is "How did the Roman ...
  A: I know that the events in the colosseum were at least partially used to distract the mob from the ...
My Prof says i have a problem with expressing myself. That my works cited is wrong, and that i dont have the necessary punctuation marks where needed.4/12/2005
  Q: This is an argument paper on the "Morning after pill" and why it should be sold over the counter for ...
  A: Editing this for you is a bigger job than I can undertake at no charge. I generally limit free work ...
letter form4/7/2005
  Q: i need to write a letter from a responsible person(eg teacher), confirming information about my ...
  A: When asking someone who values writing well to do something for you, it is a good idea to take the ...
Need help correcting entrance essay4/4/2005
  Q: Dan my name is Pam and I woudl greatly appreciate any help, comments, and corrections on this ...
  A: Reflecting on my life and my school experience, I can say they have been challenging. My parents ...
revision3/31/2005
  Q: Prompt: make a claim about the kind of impact they've had on popular culture and how or why it ...
  A: This looks reasonable to me. Go back over it carefully for missing words. For example, "Britney ...
reading comprehension3/22/2005
  Q: Sir, Good day to you, I'am a college student from Philippines, I have some questions regarding ...
  A: Read as much and as often as you can. Just the practice will help a lot. But it will do something ...
Metaphors3/21/2005
  Q: Many thanks for your fast reply, this is as far as I have got so far, the requirement is 200 words. ...
  A: Be careful that all your sentences actually are sentences. I've made a correction below: The river ...
Grammar correction3/19/2005
  Q: Could you please correct the grammar in what I wrote, Thanks Xu In Cinecittà was accommodated ...
  A: You are trying to get me to edit a very long paper for free by giving it to me a piece at at time. I ...
what3/9/2005
  Q: how can u write essysso fast ?
  A: I practice a lot, of course, and also I read a great deal and have all my life. That means I have a ...
How to brush your teeth2/28/2005
  Q: Can you please edit the below information and email me by tomorrow, March 1 by 12 noon. Thank you. ...
  A: Sorry. I have been away from my desk for about 36 hours. Also, I did not receive any notification ...
suggestion on the paper2/26/2005
  Q: i AM DOING A REFLECTION PAPER, WONDER IF YOU HAVE SUGGESTION ON CERTAIN THINGS, I NEED TO WORDS SO ...
  A: Terri, I've got several big deadlines looming this weekend for my paying customers. It will be ...
help,please ASAP!2/25/2005
  Q: i have to write an essay of no less than 150 words or more than 250 words explaining my plans for ...
  A: I'm going to have to know something about you before I can help with this, Lexy. Let's begin with ...
college admissions essay2/23/2005
  Q: upenn and a couple others. I was hoping that you could read through my essay and either, proof/edit ...
  A: I'd like to see it a bit closer to your final before I do an edit. I noted some missing words and ...
proofreading2/17/2005
  Q: Personal Strengths and weaknesses I believe life is a learning experience and we all have certain ...
  A: I believe life is a learning experience and that we all have certain personal strengths and ...
Human Relations Term Paper2/16/2005
  Q: I have a term paper to write and I can't find a start. The topic is "Discuss the damages and effects ...
  A: This is one of the most written about subjects in the world today. How have you managed to avoid ...
Dissertation2/16/2005
  Q: I have been trying to contact you but till now I am still waiting for your reply. How's my ...
  A: I have been in and out of hospital twice recently. May have lost any correspondence from you in that ...
I have a personal narative...2/15/2005
  Q: I have a personal narative paper due in 2 days and i dont know know how to start it.
  A: Narrative is just another name for story. A personal narrative is a story about you or some event in ...
College Level English Comp Research Paper2/13/2005
  Q: I am required to write a research paper based on a topic from Hemmingway's A Farwell to Arms. I ...
  A: I would use a passage from Hemingway in the introduction for its emotional impact. That will ...
project ideas for senior project in theater2/10/2005
  Q: i have to do a senior project for english and i have only 2 months to do so i was wondering do you ...
  A: I'd need a little more information. What kind of English class are you in? I can't believe you ...
editing a description of a compass2/8/2005
  Q: can you please edit and email this description for me by by 1:00 p.m. tomorrow, February 9, 20054. ...
  A: Try this. Hope it helps. The Helix Graduate Bow Compass is a lightweight, professional, friction ...
exchange application2/3/2005
  Q: I am a High school student in Washington, and for this summer I have applied to go on a foreign ...
  A: Try the changes I made below. You did very well with this, and I only made a few changes. Sometimes ...
Hello Mr. Smith! I was just...1/30/2005
  Q: Smith! I was just wondering if you were willing to maybe edit some of the future essays that I will ...
  A: Please give me a little bit more information about what I can expect. Usually, I limit my free edits ...
writing a poem1/24/2005
  Q: hey.... i need help in wring a poem on guilt.i have to use 5 synonyms and the poem must be eight ...
  A: Synonyms of what? Guilt? Must the poem rhyme, or can it be blank verse? I will confess right away ...
Reflective Essay1/24/2005
  Q: I am home schooling this first year of college and I have an essay assignment which I am not ...
  A: The "reflective essay" is not an assignment I've seen before either, but I expect the content should ...
Edit short essay1/10/2005
  Q: Can you please edit this short essay for me: Please edit for the following...spelling, parallelism, ...
  A: More than anything else, this paragraph needs an introduction. Which nation? Why was it ...
Editing of term papers1/6/2005
  Q: I need help with editing of my term paper for English writing errors. Please can you help me? ...
  A: Yes, I can help with that. Send it to me directly as an attacment dan@wordsmithofaustin.com I work ...
what is 'codes and conventions'...1/4/2005
  Q: what is 'codes and conventions'?
  A: Well, to begin with, the question should read "What are 'codes and conventions?" But to answer even ...
Outline1/2/2005
  Q: I am writing a research paper about communication in the workplace. I plan to use interviews, ...
  A: The best thing for you to do would be to take a quick trip to your university library and look at ...
Compare and Contrast?1/1/2005
  Q: My assignment is to Compare and Contrast The Scarlett Letter and Red Badge of Courage. Any help I ...
  A: I have not read "The Red Badge of Courage," and it has been many years since I read "The Scarlett ...
how can i increase the quality of mt essays1/1/2005
  Q: HAPPY NEW YEAR my essay quality is of a very low quality. Also is my grammar and i get low ...
  A: I thought I answered this already, but perhaps I didn't finish. At any rate, here are the things you ...
admission essay please help12/30/2004
  Q: i am applying to graduate school and i am required to submit two essays. one of the essay topics is ...
  A: It is difficult to see how overcoming a challenge could fail to yield a favorable impression, so ...
Thesis statement12/9/2004
  Q: Can you help me develop a thesis statement for my research paper on the holocaust? thanks, a lot.
  A: Try this: The Holocaust was the culmination of centuries of anti-Jewish violence in Europe, and it ...
college admissions essay12/8/2004
  Q: Below you will find my college admissions essay. If you have time, could you please read it and them ...
  A: Try this: 2 pints strawberries, halved or quartered 1 cup heavy cream 1 rounded tablespoon sugar 1 ...
Improving Grammar12/6/2004
  Q: Hello, my name is benny, i live in malaysia now.. but, originally from Indonesia. I have problem in ...
  A: I may be able to help with this depending on the size of the project. Because of some health ...
proofreading12/4/2004
  Q: I was wondering if you could take a look at an essay of mine on Lenin. Since I always tend to lose ...
  A: Would you send this to me directly as an attachment in Microsoft Word or in plain text. As you can ...
could you please edit my college essay12/1/2004
  Q: I was wondering if you could please look over my college essay. This is my first draft and all ...
  A: Before I began my senior year in high school, people continuously asked me which college I would ...
Mediation/Negotiation paper11/28/2004
  Q: My English teacher has asked us to write an argumentative to mediation/negotiation paper. I am not ...
  A: That sounds reasonable to me. I have not seen that particular phrasing for an assignment before, so ...
MLA term paper paragraph wording11/23/2004
  Q: Aztec Architecture was quite astonishing. The architecture was mainly composed of step pyramids, and ...
  A: Three of the four sentences are weird to me. I'm putting parenthetical comments in the orginal and ...
i need an essay on a new computer...11/22/2004
  Q: i need an essay on a new computer technology, you must present the article and also have a summary ...
  A: I can help you with this for a fee, but it is not the sort of thing I would normally do pro bono. If ...
UNICEF11/18/2004
  Q: Help! I have a 20 page research paper due on Monday on UNICEF and all the books I needed are ...
  A: I can help you with this, but this is the kind of project I would charge for. I have access to a ...
Re: Editing a paper on Greek Literature10/31/2004
  Q: Smith! How are you? I wrote this paper, that I believe lacks and needs work, I was wondering if you ...
  A: I took a quick look. You really need to watch out for subject-verb disagreement and for wrong words ...
presentation10/27/2004
  Q: i need to write a short essay on this topic i need to write a speech to explain why the student ...
  A: I can probably help with this, but would need much more information. If you like, you can contact me ...
mla style10/26/2004
  Q: Im trying to write a research paper on video game violence in MLA style. I would like to use an ...
  A: Yes. You must document it. Provide information about title, publication date, manufacturer, maybe ...
proof-reading10/24/2004
  Q: my name is Michelle and I'm a student at a local college, and I'm writing a research paper on ...
  A: Bringing a newborn into the world is one of the greatest and most profound experiences in one's ...
am i on the right track with my essay? can u tell me and if there any suggest please let me know is the grammar okay?10/22/2004
  Q: Hey this is the purpose of the essay okay.... Call for Applications for "Bringing the World Home" ...
  A: First of all, I am not a "u" and neither are you. The correct spelling is "you," and it is hard to ...
Editing Brave New World10/18/2004
  Q: Dan! I'm very glad to see you offering such a great service, especially since I am in need of this. ...
  A: In an over-organized, cliché-speaking world, one character stands out above all others: Bernard ...
Genesis ch 6-910/17/2004
  Q: Would you be able to help? I will type the essay topic below exactly how it appears, followed by my ...
  A: Behind the Flood The author's argument in Genesis, Chapters six through nine, seems to be trying to ...
Check essay10/15/2004
  Q: Can you please check my personal narrative for me? Please check for the following: maintain tense ...
  A: My heart thumps against my chest as I drag my bag along the carpet floor and into the corridor. As I ...
revising10/12/2004
  Q: i need help on correction of my paper and if u have any suggest for me feel free to let me know i ...
  A: You have not done enough basic proofing work on this essay to send it to someone else. A couple of ...
Essays10/11/2004
  Q: I want to know if you can check my essay for grammar and puncation mistakes
  A: Yes. Send it to me as an attachment in Word or Text format (rich or plain) to: ...
Discourse analysis/linguistics10/5/2004
  Q: Are you familiar with discourse analysis and linguistics? I am doing a dissertation on discourse ...
  A: My thesis was a content analysis of printed materials, and the general methodology seems similar. I ...
egypt10/3/2004
  Q: what beliefs did the egyptians hold concerning life after death?
  A: This is not an area of real expertise for me, but they definitely believed in an afterlife to which ...
paper writing using apa format?9/29/2004
  Q: I am not familiar with the apa writing format. Can you give me the materials to help me write my ...
  A: You need the Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association (APA). You can find it at ...
Term paper9/28/2004
  Q: I have a term paper on "the ways art, architecture, and literature reflect the strains of the early ...
  A: This is way outside my expertise. Why don't you do searches on "Renaissance", "Renaissance Art", ...
Help with Political Science homework9/28/2004
  Q: I have the assignment to write a paper on the FCC case against Howard Stern in 1992 and I can't ...
  A: I did a Google search and turned up these sites: http://www.fact-index.com/h/ho/howard_stern.html ...
Hello. I have paper do on...9/5/2004
  Q: I have paper do on Isaac Singer's "Gimple the Fool." I need help with the paper and was curious if ...
  A: I offer an array of services. If you would like more extensive help, write to me directly at: ...
i need help with a Hamlet paper9/3/2004
  Q: i need help on an essay I have to write. I have to choose a work of lit. and identify a character ...
  A: You would do better with one of the volunteers who is an expert in English literature than with me ...
Vietnam War9/1/2004
  Q: I need help on writing a research paper on the vietnam War
  A: I can and do help with research papers. Write to me directly at dan@wordsmithofaustin.com and tell ...
Theoretical frameworks8/28/2004
  Q: Im at UNI doing Therapeutic Recreation. I did a presentation on fire safety and now required to do a ...
  A: Without a bit more context, I cannot tell whether the theoretical framework has to do with the ...
Bibliography8/17/2004
  Q: I have a couple of questions: 1.) If you cite essays from a book, do you put the whole book in the ...
  A: Answer to 1. Here is one way. Inside [] indicates formatting that I can't show here. Inside () is ...
A dolls house by Ibsen8/13/2004
  Q: Dan Smith: Hi. Im doing a research paper on the play "A Doll's House" by Ibsen. I wanted to ...
  A: This is not something on which I have a great deal of expertise, but I did a Google search on the ...
Write a one page essay7/19/2004
  Q: “Where I (you) would like to be career-wise 10 years from today.”
  A: What is your question of me? I cannot just make this up for you because where I want to be in 10 ...
Essay help7/18/2004
  Q: I need to write an essay either defending or rejecting the following statement: "The family is an ...
  A: Why don't you e-mail me what you have done so far and let me take a look? Is this an essay or a ...
hotel and restaurant management7/18/2004
  Q: what is a good topic under this course that is good to be a research paper.. thank you..
  A: Here are a few: 1. Controlling costs without sacrificing quality of service or product. 2. Growth ...
MLA's rules on large quotes7/11/2004
  Q: I am writing an essay for a scholarship contest which requires citing verses from the Bible. Because ...
  A: Most academic papers are double spaced, but follow the instructions for this submission if there are ...
paper topic7/8/2004
  Q: I have ben instructed to write a 600 word classification paper. It is nothing that has to be in ...
  A: The best known example of a classification paper by a nonexpert is Melville's argument in Moby Dick ...
strong thesis6/29/2004
  Q: basically I have to Analyze the use of language and metre in the passage and discuss how it ...
  A: You're making the conjunctions work too hard and trying to provide more information than a thesis ...
strong thesis6/27/2004
  Q: I would like to know if the thesis I have written down is good and strong enough to argue. Thanks, ...
  A: You'd need to ask someone more recently familiar with Romeo and Juliet to be sure of the content, ...
please edit my research paper6/18/2004
  Q: please can you edit my research paper. Thank You. _________________________________________________ ...
  A: This is not far enough along for me to edit it. I can tell you that some of the formatting is not ...
Medical mission statments6/16/2004
  Q: I need help writing a mission statment for a medical clinic this is for my medical office procedures ...
  A: Try one of these. Mission: To serve those in need of medical services with integrity, ...
ESSAY(why do you do exercise)6/14/2004
  Q: please write essy following topic DO YOU DO EXCERCISE. 1 why do you do excercise. 2when do you ...
  A: A 5,000 word essay is much more than I can do as a volunteer. That's about 16 pages of double-spaced ...
Please Edit my Essay6/9/2004
  Q: I am writing a comparison and contrast essay. While I was writing my Essay, I'm having problem if ...
  A: Compare and contrast essays are usually the same assignment. Formally, the compare part shows how ...
writing a letter to corporations for money to our trip6/5/2004
  Q: I bunch from our school are planning to go to Germany next summer 2005 for World Youth Day. We are ...
  A: Well, you have enough of a head start, I think that you should have a fighting chance at raising the ...
english composition; essay6/3/2004
  Q: i am writting an essay based on compare and contrast for my engish composition class. i wrote a 5 ...
  A: There are just lots of things you can compare and contrast. Here are a few. Kerry and Bush Bush and ...
research outlines5/28/2004
  Q: I am doing research with my students in the library. Do you have any sample outlines they could use ...
  A: No. Sorry. But the proper order of business for them to follow in their research would be to do a ...
Grammer and punctuation5/26/2004
  Q: Would you please look at my paper.I need help in grammer and punctuation and I also feel it is ...
  A: Lung Cancer Lung cancer kills more than 344,000 people each year, making it the third most deadly ...
Please edit my essay5/26/2004
  Q: Can you edit my description essay please. Thank You. Closed Friend I met Stacy, ...
  A: I met Stacy, my new close friend, soon after I started Xavier High School. She is an unusual and ...
proof read5/25/2004
  Q: Could you please tell me if my grammer,puncuation,and sentence structure is correct in this paper.It ...
  A: OK. I have it. Never mind sending it to me directly. Here it is. After being in surgery for three ...
can you help me with my grammar...5/12/2004
  Q: can you help me with my grammar and with correction check if i answered the question. thanks ...
  A: A recession is a period during which economic activity falls off, and the effects spread across the ...
Dissertatiom5/8/2004
  Q: What do you mean by style guide? Regards RobHello, For my third year dissertation at the ...
  A: There are a number of guides to writing papers of this nature. But if your faculty has not specified ...
Dissertatiom5/8/2004
  Q: For my third year dissertation at the University of Gloucestershire, I am looking into multimedia ...
  A: I am not able to download this in an editible form. It opens in the browser, but not in Word, so I ...
Could you proof/edit my research paper?5/5/2004
  Q: I would appreciate it if you could edit my paper. Thanks! EVOLUTION Of the many wild and wacky ...
  A: Your essay is mostly grammaticaly correct, but it is factually incorrect in almost every regard. It ...
Essay question5/3/2004
  Q: I have an assignment concerning elder abuse and neglect. I don't understand the following question ...
  A: It is rather awkwardly phrased, isn't it? As nearly as I can tell, the question assumes that you ...
Can you edit my essay4/27/2004
  Q: my name is Toni, I'm just asking if you want to edit my essay please. Thank you. It suppose to be ...
  A: Try this: Some parents believe that beating their children is an appropriate way to discipline ...
paper write4/26/2004
  Q: i am look for someone who write for free. because i have try to do it my self but it dose not work ...
  A: I'm sorry, Stephanie, on a couple of counts. I have not read this book to begin with, so I would ...
admission essay4/22/2004
  Q: I want to thank you in my first essay, this is the second one, their questions was; Why do you want ...
  A: You're welcome. Try this. I am a cultured, self-confident, and competitive individual and have ...
English phrase into Latin4/21/2004
  Q: im tryin to figure out how to say "money is the root of all evil" in latin
  A: That's not something I can do for you. If you do a Web search on Latin translation, you will find ...
Writing an Essay4/19/2004
  Q: I am doing a little essay for the Admission to School, they asked: "What will you do after Les ...
  A: Try this. The biggest problem was that you had a lot of extra material in the essay that did not add ...
Research Study4/16/2004
  Q: "I have to write a Dissertation which relate to media. I was thinking about how the broadcasting of ...
  A: The topic is understandable to me at any rate. And I suspect there is a decent amount of literature ...
writing biography4/15/2004
  Q: Please try to help me about how to teach writing biography in English for Arab tenth grade students ...
  A: This is a bit out of my field of expertise, but I would start by having them read some biographies, ...
revision4/15/2004
  Q: CONTENT: Read the following scenario, Sammy and Tami. Briefly, in one-page, argue for whether ...
  A: I am sorry for the delay. I answered this question once, and my answer did not get posted. You need ...
how to get started4/13/2004
  Q: The assignment is to write a paper about an authors stlye of writing. For example the last paper ...
  A: I'm not a good one to ask on this topic. Contemporary American literature is not my field, and I ...
definition3/28/2004
  Q: We are in the process with our youngest child of picking a college, my question is "What is the ...
  A: That distinction is a bit murky, but in general a university is a big college that has been ...
APA format3/24/2004
  Q: I have to write a paper using APA format. Can you offer any help! I am looking for guidelines or ...
  A: Purchase a copy of the Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association (APA), 5th ...
Dissertations topic3/24/2004
  Q: I have to write a Dissertation which relate to media. I was thinking about writing about the media ...
  A: The topic you mention is a good one, I think. A great deal fo research has been done on how ...
Term Paper3/23/2004
  Q: I have never written a term paper before. I need help starting one. Are there any good websites ...
  A: I have not really looked for sites that are devoted to the subject of term papers in general. The ...
Mediation of Northern Ireland3/17/2004
  Q: I am a college student, writing my last essay for my English 103, argument and persuasion class. ...
  A: Curriculum writers have come up with so many new categories of essay of late that I must always ask ...
Hello Dan how are you doing?...3/17/2004
  Q: it does not stick to my head. SO can u plases help me
  A: Oddly, I am trying to memorize some German lyrics to an opera I'm in and they won't stick in my head ...
edit and proofread essay3/16/2004
  Q: I was wondering if you also do editing and proofreading for essays. I have this essay due on friday ...
  A: Yes. I do edit such materials, and if you get it to me quickly I will be able to work it in. I ...
MLA Format!3/14/2004
  Q: I am writing an essay on Oliver Twist due tomorrow. The assignment was to take a quote and analyze ...
  A: The best advice I can give you is to follow your teacher's instructions. You may have a perfectly ...
Will u please edit my essay for me3/12/2004
  Q: Adolescents Growing Up in Today's Society Adolescents in today's society are exposed to a more ...
  A: Adolescents in today's society are exposed to a more mature enviroment than was the case fifteen ...
english3/12/2004
  Q: I'M HAVING TROUBLE STARTING MY ESSAY OFF. MY TOPIC IS: VACATIONS ARE NECESSARY FOR MOST PEOPLE.
  A: Why don't you start with a little introduction about the different forms vacations can take, then ...
Proof checkin3/10/2004
  Q: Im just enquirying my english is not the best and i often write many reports. Would u check and ...
  A: I have a number of clients for whom I do such work. Generally, what I can do strictly as a volunteer ...
Essay to edit3/8/2004
  Q: I am a first time user here and I need my essay to be edited. I was wondering if you have an e-mail ...
  A: Send to: dan@wordsmithofaustin.com. I'll take a look and edit it. It is much easier to work with an ...
High school English Composition3/8/2004
  Q: Hey Dan, I am a 12 grader at Wadsworth High School, and I have to write a Character Profile paper on ...
  A: If I were you, I would read some profiles on people that have been written on the Internet. You ...
Can u correct my essay3/8/2004
  Q: i was wondering if you can edit my essay and give me any tips on what i can do to make it better? ...
  A: I took a quick look, and the essay does indeed need an edit. But it is a 1900-word essay--about 6 ...
revisio- sorry I didnt receive the recipe from allexperts3/5/2004
  Q: sorry i dont know if u receive my essay but here it is again... i didnt get a confirmation from ...
  A: I did already answer this question. But here is my answer again. You need to go back over the ...
revision3/4/2004
  Q: Can u read it through and see if my organization or transition flow together. I am having problem ...
  A: Yes, Tiffen, there are serious grammatical problems throughout the essay that will require a full ...
English speech3/1/2004
  Q: I have and persuasive speech coming up and i was wondering if you had any idea's i could do it on. ...
  A: You should pick a topic about which you have an opinion. Matters of public policy are good, but you ...
reversion3/1/2004
  Q: i have to read an article and turn it into an essay (this is for philosophy class)... i wonder if u ...
  A: In the article, “Death Penalty Has No Place In the U.S.,” by Cynthia Tucker, the author discusses ...
profile essay2/26/2004
  Q: i am suppose to be doing a pfofile essay on a place.the problem is finding the place and the ...
  A: Curricula these days call common essay types by all sorts of odd names. As nearly as I can tell, the ...
Interpersonal communication2/25/2004
  Q: I have added more and was wondering if this sounds better and need someone to proofread or add more ...
  A: I set you back one edit, and that is really all I have time for right now. You should incorporate ...
Interpersonal communication2/25/2004
  Q: I need help with this paper, ideas, more to add, and proofread. I need help ASAP! I'm no good at ...
  A: My Communication Skills Interpersonal Communication is the communication between two to five ...
reading novels?2/24/2004
  Q: I am a senior (Grade 12) student. I moved here from Indonesia 10 years ago, so English is not my ...
  A: The usual way to read a novel, of course, is as recreation. But when you are in school it's supposed ...
My casebook2/24/2004
  Q: if i sent you my casebook could you help me rearrange it to really have good fluidity?
  A: I need a bit more information before I can answer this. What kind of casebook are we talking about. ...
editing- gr.12 student2/23/2004
  Q: Volunteers are people who donate their time to help individuals and organizations by personal choice ...
  A: Volunteers are people who donate their time to help individuals and organizations by personal choice ...
Proof-read/editing2/21/2004
  Q: I have written a research paper on Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder. I was wondering if you could edit ...
  A: OBSESSIVE–COMPULSIVE DISORDER WHAT IS OCD? What was once thought to be a rare mental disease is ...
hi i wanted to know if u can help me correct my paper2/17/2004
  Q: is my grammar okay? can u help to expand or suggest ideas on my paper for me? especially on my ...
  A: The Most Important Three days of April The Khmer New Year is a Cambodian festival that is celebrated ...
English2/17/2004
  Q: I was wondering if you could read my essay and tell me what my weakest areas are. Thak you. The ...
  A: The narrative is clear, as is usually the case with a narrative. You have a good sense of line to ...
about the service2/16/2004
  Q: I am a pharmacy school student. I just happened to come across the web site. I was looking for ...
  A: I am pretty much always available for such services, but it is a good idea not to jam me up at the ...
right direction?2/12/2004
  Q: is this good? Any pointers? Fran The novel Angela's Ashes is an excellent piece of work. Through ...
  A: The novel Angela's Ashes is an excellent piece of work. Through this memoir, the reader is immersed ...
editing2/12/2004
  Q: .i really appreciate it..would it be possible if u can edit this also...thank you sooooo much! ...
  A: I am receiving an error message when I respond to questions, and that is why you may not have ...
editing2/12/2004
  Q: i am currently in grade 12, we had to do a paragraph on one technology invention that we cannot live ...
  A: Computers have improved our world in many ways and has been involved in every aspect of technology. ...
editing2/12/2004
  Q: i am currently in grade 12, we had to do a paragraph on one technology invention that we cannot live ...
  A: Computers have improved our world in many ways and has been involved in developing almost other ...
embedded references1/2/2004
  Q: How do I write an embedded reference out properly?
  A: I'm assuming that by this term you mean a reference that is part of the sentence structure rather ...
revision10/13/2003
  Q: THis is what my teacher wants and he is really cofusing... introduction: establish with statistics ...
  A: You probably have enough facts here to support a good paper on the subject, but you make so many ...
Fecundity9/8/2003
  Q: PLease help me a little if you have time critisim is fine also. Thank You so much. Fecundity ...
  A: At the risk of seeming entirely mercenary, I do want you to know that I am available for larger ...
Research Help Needed7/18/2003
  Q: I am helping someone with a research assignment in Economics. And I've hit a snag. We need to find ...
  A: The Wall Street Journal is always a good source, but the online version is by subscription. The May ...
Dont know how to start!6/24/2003
  Q: I hope you can point me in the right direction... I have started my University Dissertation on ...
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bibliography5/4/2003
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research paper3/11/2003
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Thesis statement3/9/2003
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  A: The general focus of the piece seems fine, and you seem to be pretty adept with the mechanics of ...
APA and credit.2/14/2003
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  A: If you use someone else's ideas, you should credit that person. You do not need to credit each ...
Jane Eyre Term Paper Problems1/16/2003
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  A: The body of the essay (the material following the introduction) should contain arguments that ...

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