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| proofreading | 2/17/2005 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: Personal Strengths and weaknesses I believe life is a learning experience and we all have certain ...
A: I like your content a lot, especially your honesty about areas you need improvement in. I would ...
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| Human Relations Term Paper | 2/16/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I have a term paper to write and I can't find a start. The topic is "Discuss the damages and effects ...
A: This is one of the most written about subjects in the world today. How have you managed to avoid ...
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| Dissertation | 2/16/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I have been trying to contact you but till now I am still waiting for your reply. How's my ...
A: I have been in and out of hospital twice recently. May have lost any correspondence from you in that ...
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| I have a personal narative... | 2/15/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I have a personal narative paper due in 2 days and i dont know know how to start it.
A: Narrative is just another name for story. A personal narrative is a story about you or some event in ...
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| College Level English Comp Research Paper | 2/13/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I am required to write a research paper based on a topic from Hemmingway's A Farwell to Arms. I ...
A: I would use a passage from Hemingway in the introduction for its emotional impact. That will ...
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| project ideas for senior project in theater | 2/10/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: i have to do a senior project for english and i have only 2 months to do so i was wondering do you ...
A: I'd need a little more information. What kind of English class are you in? I can't believe you ...
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| editing a description of a compass | 2/8/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: can you please edit and email this description for me by by 1:00 p.m. tomorrow, February 9, 20054. ...
A: Try this. Hope it helps. The Helix Graduate Bow Compass is a lightweight, professional, friction ...
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| exchange application | 2/3/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I am a High school student in Washington, and for this summer I have applied to go on a foreign ...
A: Try the changes I made below. You did very well with this, and I only made a few changes. Sometimes ...
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| Hello Mr. Smith! I was just... | 1/30/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: Smith! I was just wondering if you were willing to maybe edit some of the future essays that I will ...
A: Please give me a little bit more information about what I can expect. Usually, I limit my free edits ...
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| history | 1/27/2005 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: berlin wall&its fame?
A: The Berlin Wall was constructed in 1961 to separate East and West Germany. It gained fame as a ...
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| writing a poem | 1/24/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: hey.... i need help in wring a poem on guilt.i have to use 5 synonyms and the poem must be eight ...
A: Synonyms of what? Guilt? Must the poem rhyme, or can it be blank verse? I will confess right away ...
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| Reflective Essay | 1/24/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I am home schooling this first year of college and I have an essay assignment which I am not ...
A: The "reflective essay" is not an assignment I've seen before either, but I expect the content should ...
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| edit short essay | 1/10/2005 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: Can you please edit this short essay for me: Please edit for the following...spelling, parallelism, ...
A: Also, elminate the numbers l) The nation had to protect and promote equality and acceptance as a ...
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| Edit short essay | 1/10/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: Can you please edit this short essay for me: Please edit for the following...spelling, parallelism, ...
A: More than anything else, this paragraph needs an introduction. Which nation? Why was it ...
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| Editing of term papers | 1/6/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I need help with editing of my term paper for English writing errors. Please can you help me? ...
A: Yes, I can help with that. Send it to me directly as an attacment dan@wordsmithofaustin.com I work ...
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| what is 'codes and conventions'... | 1/4/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: what is 'codes and conventions'?
A: Well, to begin with, the question should read "What are 'codes and conventions?" But to answer even ...
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| Outline | 1/2/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: I am writing a research paper about communication in the workplace. I plan to use interviews, ...
A: The best thing for you to do would be to take a quick trip to your university library and look at ...
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| u.s. history | 1/2/2005 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: was slavery profitable?
A: That is a question that is still being debated by historians. The general concensus is that slavery ...
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| Compare and Contrast? | 1/1/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: My assignment is to Compare and Contrast The Scarlett Letter and Red Badge of Courage. Any help I ...
A: I have not read "The Red Badge of Courage," and it has been many years since I read "The Scarlett ...
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| how can i increase the quality of mt essays | 1/1/2005 | Dan Smith |
Q: HAPPY NEW YEAR my essay quality is of a very low quality. Also is my grammar and i get low ...
A: I thought I answered this already, but perhaps I didn't finish. At any rate, here are the things you ...
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| admission essay please help | 12/30/2004 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: i am applying to graduate school and i am required to submit two essays. one of the essay topics is ...
A: The best way to handle the admission essay question is to write about either work or school related. ...
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| admission essay please help | 12/30/2004 | Ryan Wantz |
Q: i am applying to graduate school and i am required to submit two essays. one of the essay topics is ...
A: Shlomo, It is important that you put into words a challenge that will set you apart, but that can be ...
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| admission essay please help | 12/30/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: i am applying to graduate school and i am required to submit two essays. one of the essay topics is ...
A: It is difficult to see how overcoming a challenge could fail to yield a favorable impression, so ...
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| Thesis and introduction | 12/24/2004 | Ryan Wantz |
Q: The topic of my research paper is Video Game Violence. Is my topic too broad? My purpose of my paper ...
A: Chrissy, First of all your thesis is fine as long as that states your paper well. Second, talk about ...
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| Skin Disorders term paper (thesis statement) | 12/9/2004 | Ryan Wantz |
Q: I wanted to know if when you write your thesis statement,do you say something like: Skin disorders ...
A: Toccara, The thesis is the point of the paper. What are you trying to get across in the next 10 ...
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| Thesis statement | 12/9/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Can you help me develop a thesis statement for my research paper on the holocaust? thanks, a lot.
A: Try this: The Holocaust was the culmination of centuries of anti-Jewish violence in Europe, and it ...
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| college admissions essay | 12/8/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Below you will find my college admissions essay. If you have time, could you please read it and them ...
A: Try this: 2 pints strawberries, halved or quartered 1 cup heavy cream 1 rounded tablespoon sugar 1 ...
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| Improving Grammar | 12/6/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Hello, my name is benny, i live in malaysia now.. but, originally from Indonesia. I have problem in ...
A: I may be able to help with this depending on the size of the project. Because of some health ...
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| proofreading | 12/4/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: I was wondering if you could take a look at an essay of mine on Lenin. Since I always tend to lose ...
A: Would you send this to me directly as an attachment in Microsoft Word or in plain text. As you can ...
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| could you please edit my college essay | 12/1/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: I was wondering if you could please look over my college essay. This is my first draft and all ...
A: Before I began my senior year in high school, people continuously asked me which college I would ...
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| help | 11/30/2004 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: tell me some stuff about the planet venus for my science homework! please!
A: Well, Venus is 800 degrees F and is hot and covered by carbon dioxidegases. If you look at the sky ...
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| Mediation/Negotiation paper | 11/28/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: My English teacher has asked us to write an argumentative to mediation/negotiation paper. I am not ...
A: That sounds reasonable to me. I have not seen that particular phrasing for an assignment before, so ...
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| MLA term paper paragraph wording | 11/23/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Aztec Architecture was quite astonishing. The architecture was mainly composed of step pyramids, and ...
A: Three of the four sentences are weird to me. I'm putting parenthetical comments in the orginal and ...
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| i need an essay on a new computer... | 11/22/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: i need an essay on a new computer technology, you must present the article and also have a summary ...
A: I can help you with this for a fee, but it is not the sort of thing I would normally do pro bono. If ...
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| UNICEF | 11/18/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Help! I have a 20 page research paper due on Monday on UNICEF and all the books I needed are ...
A: I can help you with this, but this is the kind of project I would charge for. I have access to a ...
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| Re: Editing a paper on Greek Literature | 10/31/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Smith! How are you? I wrote this paper, that I believe lacks and needs work, I was wondering if you ...
A: I took a quick look. You really need to watch out for subject-verb disagreement and for wrong words ...
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| Sir Edmund Hillary | 10/29/2004 | Janet Ilacqua |
Q: Janet. i have to write an essay abou Sir Edmund Hillary, the first person to climb Mt. Everest. how ...
A: Edmund Hiliary climbed Everest in 1953. He was the leaders of the expedition so that it is why he ...
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| presentation | 10/27/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: i need to write a short essay on this topic i need to write a speech to explain why the student ...
A: I can probably help with this, but would need much more information. If you like, you can contact me ...
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| mla style | 10/26/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: Im trying to write a research paper on video game violence in MLA style. I would like to use an ...
A: Yes. You must document it. Provide information about title, publication date, manufacturer, maybe ...
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| proof-reading | 10/24/2004 | Dan Smith |
Q: my name is Michelle and I'm a student at a local college, and I'm writing a research paper on ...
A: Bringing a newborn into the world is one of the greatest and most profound experiences in one's ...
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