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Persuasive Essay due Tuesday!3/17/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I have a persuasive essay (draft) due this Tuesday and have no idea what to write. I have researched ...
  A: The thesis is obvious: "Children should be protected from online predators." That's it. And a lot ...
starting an essay3/14/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I have to write an essay but I don't know how to start/ how to approch it. It there a way or ...
  A: A good bit has been written about the language and nationalistic divisions in Canada between the ...
starting an essay3/14/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: I have to write an essay but I don't know how to start/ how to approch it. It there a way or ...
  A: Well, how much do you know about the subject? If it's nothing, then I suggest that you do some ...
Business Studies (work/life balance dissertation)3/13/2007Dan Smith
  Q: i hope ur fine and well,I am a final yr University Student, my question concerns a topic area of ...
  A: I think your big problem will be in finding too much rather than too little material. To be sure ...
why?3/2/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I asked a question on here and the response I received was rather short and rude, I am wandering ...
  A: Of course, I don't know what the original answer was, but my own answer would be that you should ...
Lord of the Flies2/18/2007Heathyr
  Q: I am a 10th grader and have an upcoming in class essay on Lord of the Flies. My teacher ask us to ...
  A: Personally, I'd go from whichever angle would A) get me a better grade, B) utilize the character I ...
Lord of the Flies2/18/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: I am a 10th grader and have an upcoming in class essay on Lord of the Flies. My teacher ask us to ...
  A: Well, I can't really answer your question--because you're the one who has to choose. If you can ...
thesis2/17/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: I have a thesis to do on apparel and I want to relate it to outsourcing or offshoring, but I do not ...
  A: You need to do the preliminary research on both topics. When you've gathered the information, you ...
revise essay2/10/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: EssayIn 500 words, tell about what makes you, you. What are you strenghts, weaknesses, and your ...
  A: versus strengths--change to "versus our strengths." I would like to say that I am very computer ...
memo writing2/8/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I fired an employee who was insubordinate. As a result , I assigned responsibilities in my ...
  A: Your memo should not mention the discharged employee at all. That is between you and that employee, ...
thesis2/4/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I already did research on the paper and I had a good thesis sentence, but I was not sure if I can ...
  A: That is not a thesis statement. That is a thesis question. Take a side, make it a statement, and ...
Question about biography2/1/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: I want to write a biography about my grandfather and I have a couple questions. 1. He was in ...
  A: I would ask your grandfather these questions. Once he tells you where he was, then, you can do a ...
Can you please help me?1/31/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I have failed this test and i cant find the answers. Will you please help me by answering some of ...
  A: 3. Which one of the following sentences is written in the active voice? B. however, few people ...
thesis1/31/2007Dan Smith
  Q: Sorry to bother you again, but what do you mean? can you give me some examples and possibly a thesis ...
  A: No. I can't write your thesis sentence for you. I haven't researched the topic in any detail at all. ...
thesis1/30/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I have a 25 page thesis due in a month. I was given the apparel industry by my professsor. What ...
  A: The thing that comes to mind for me is the way the apparel industry has become almost entirely a ...
"Critical Lens" paper1/17/2007Dan Smith
  Q: My daughter is a Sophomore at a Long Island Public School. She is taking an Honors English class and ...
  A: Please send it to me directly as an attachment in Microsoft Word or as a text file if you do not ...
MLA paper1/15/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: I was wondering if you would be able to assist me. I have to write a MLA paper on encephalitis and I ...
  A: 1. Make sure you understand what encephalitis is and what causes it. 2. Do some preliminary research ...
help1/13/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: so i should just build my strenghts,right?and stop worrying about the stories part? the only reason ...
  A: Absolutely. It's great that your classmates can write stories, but that doesn't mean you have to, ...
Revise short answers for admissions1/12/2007Dan Smith
  Q: Could you please take to the time and revise this for me. Thanks! A. Write about your academic ...
  A: A. Write about your academic interests and the personal or academic ezperiences that have led to or ...
help1/12/2007Wendy Komancheck
  Q: i'm a class 10 student(age 15) and i've got my board exams this year. in our english lang. paper ...
  A: Well, there's no way to tell what types of debatable questions that they'll ask on the exam. So, I ...
help1/12/2007Dan Smith
  Q: i'm a class 10 student(age 15) and i've got my board exams this year. in our english lang. paper ...
  A: Since you read a great deal, I doubt you will have any difficulty with the essays. Your question to ...
Evaluation test1/9/2007Dan Smith
  Q: Sorry if this question is not in the correct category, but I need help. I recently moved to Toronto ...
  A: I'm sorry. I am in the United States and am not at all familiar with these tests. I would take them ...
492 word college application essay, can you please proofread1/7/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I don't have a long essay or anything but I would greatly appreciate if you can give me a quick ...
  A: The "not only" construction is generally a weak one. Use it very sparingly, and almost never to ...
integral calculus1/5/2007Dan Smith
  Q: why is integral calculus important to the math world and how does it apply outside of math? how is ...
  A: This sounds like a homework question. But in general, integral calculus is used to describe in ...
Citing movies1/3/2007Dan Smith
  Q: I am writing a essay and I have to have a works cited page. What is the structure for citing movies?
  A: It depends on the style manual you are using. If movies are involved, I would assume you have been ...
Thesis Concerns (sorry forgot to attach)12/19/2006Dan Smith
  Q: Smith, I'm writing an English 111 paper and I have a few concerns about my introduction paragraph. ...
  A: In William Faulkner’s short story, “A Rose for Emily,” we are presented with a barrage of ...
Learning to write12/18/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I am on my winter break and despite being a couple years into college I feel like I am severely ...
  A: Actually, my recommendation is that you NOT get any book on writing. Instead, over the holidays, ...
English homework12/16/2006Dan Smith
  Q: Hey Dan, I am in grade 9 and I have english this semester. How can I improve my English mark?
  A: Two ways: Read. Read a lot, and read good stuff. For short pieces that are usually well written, ...
short essay12/14/2006Dan Smith
  Q: My name is Liza and I am a student at Carleton College. I am applying for internships this summer. ...
  A: I’ve known my whole life that I wanted to go to college. My mom was first generation, finishing her ...
Challenging Thesis12/2/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I have to list five sub-claims that will support my thesis. My thesis is "Family history of Breast ...
  A: If you don't have five sub-claims to support your thesis, you will have to do some research and find ...
Mediation essay12/1/2006Dan Smith
  Q: My assignment is to write a mediation essay that mediates between an argumentative essay and its ...
  A: Gee. Teachers are coming up with so many different variations on the essay theme that it is almost ...
eng comp II11/29/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I wanted to know if Tiresia(antigone by Sophocles) is a hubris and if so in modern or Greek sense. I ...
  A: Well, "hubris" is "excessive pride or arrogance." Thus, it is a quality of character. A person or ...
Essays11/20/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I am an 8th grade student, Average, and my teacher has been talking about using mla format with like ...
  A: My goodness! She's getting you off to an early start. Good for her! MLA refers to the Modern ...
book report11/17/2006Dan Smith
  Q: i am writing a book report and I was wondering if you could edit what I wrote so far. As you can ...
  A: Adesso! An Introduction to Italian provides students with a clear, simple and successful way of ...
historiography11/17/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I'm a junior in college. I am in the process of writing a historiography paper on Southern ...
  A: Well, I grew up in the middle of it, but it's not really an area of expertise. But organizing papers ...
agricultural productivity11/17/2006Dan Smith
  Q: hello dan smith how can agricultural productivity be enhanced in nigeria
  A: Almost any productivity can be enhanced in Nigeria if the delusional fools will stop fighting over ...
scientific analysis11/16/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I was just wondering if you could give me a hand with an essay i have to write for a university ...
  A: Well, the first thing I would have to do is read u on the Dunham Technique and find out what it is. ...
MLA ESSAY ?????11/10/2006Dan Smith
  Q: This is my first year in high school and I've never had to right an essay. This is my first time ...
  A: You WRITE essays. You do not "right" them. Be careful about that sort of thing. MLA stands for ...
Contemporary Art Theory since 198511/9/2006Dan Smith
  Q: My assignment is to write an essay as though I had entered into a discussion regarding one subtopic ...
  A: If I understand corrected, you are to read five different essays on a topic, each expressing a ...
Vietnam War Help11/6/2006Dan Smith
  Q: I have this HUGE Vietnam War research paper due, and I don't really know what to begin on ...
  A: Why not research the early history of the war? How the United States got involved to begin with. An ...

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