Expert: Felicia Reymont - 2/2/2006

Question
Hi Felicia,
Please help!  I'm in desperate help in properly wording my wedd. invitations.  Being a writer, you would think this was a piece of cake!
My fiance and I are sending the invitations.  Below is an idea of how I'd like it to be, (unless you can help me make it sound better.)

The honor of your presence is requested at the Wedding of
Paulette Smith
And
Tom Smith

On Saturday the seventeenth of June
At two o'clock in the afternoon
Toronto City Hall, Wedding Belle Chapel
200 King Street West
Toronto, Ontario

... Now my issue is, I'd also like to include how we're to go across the street from City hall to Victoria Park where professional photography will be taking place(3pm)... then followed by reception at Delta Inn with dinner at (4pm).  Do I include Delta's address as well?

Plus, how I do start the return cards?  What do I put on them?  I'm a hopeless soul, so if you could, please help me out!  If you could possibly send some samples or let me know how and what order, or how to correctly word everything?  Please help.


Answer
Well, Paulette, I can see the problem.  A formal nuts and bolts invitation might work but it will not entertain.  As you might expect, I think it should be done in rhyme and that is my specialty. Visit my website : www.rhymeshop.com.  There you'll see how easy it is to get the writing help you need. Regards, Felicia Reymont, rhymeshop@aol.com