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What are the guidelines for writing currency in dialogue? Example: "They vary from fifty thousand dollars to one hundred dollars," David said. "Mine is a different," Bob countered, "ranging from ten thousand dollars to one dollar per week."

In a narrative without quotes, the numbers look okay. But for some reason, when I use them in dialogue, they look strange. Please help. Thanks.

Thank you for asking this question.

Chicago Style, which most book publishers use as a guideline, says that numerals one through one hundred should be written out and numbers may be used for larger figures, although dates are usually the exception. This guideline can apply to dialogue as well as narrative.

Frankly, I prefer to see numerals in dialogue written out, myself, especially in the examples you sent, but consistency is more important than specifics. In other words, the final sentence would be inconsistent if it were written strictly by the guideline, because it would come out like this: "Mine is different," Bob countered, "ranging from 10,000 dollars to one dollar per week."

You can see why Chicago Style allows for alternatives for consistency within paragraphs or concepts.

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Book Doctor Bobbie Christmas owns Zebra Communications, a book-editing firm in metro Atlanta. She not only edits books, she also helps writers power up their prose to increase their chances of success. She is the author of Write In Style (Union Square Publishing), a creative-writing guide that won three awards.


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