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QUESTION: Miss Clamp,

    I'm asking for help on a book I'm writing with Norse mythology but I need help creating a unique enemy. Any pointers? Please Help!!


ANSWER: Hi, Mary!

A lot depends on what sort of story you're writing. Is this fiction? Non-fiction? Is it children's, young adult, or adult? Is the hero human or demi-god or god? Do you want the villain to be someone equal-ish in power to the hero/ine or totally overwhelming him/her?

Give me a bit more and we'll see what we can come up with. :)


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QUESTION: Hi again,
 The book is fiction (of course) for young adults and the heroine starts off human but is mutating into a demi-god sort of thing with abilities that she is continuously finding out about in the book. The villain can be slightly more powerful but overall, they are equal.

         Thank you for hearing me out!

P.S. This is my first book, so I want the book to be somewhat good. So some of my questions may be somewhat stupid, but can you PLEASE bare with me? Again, thank you so much.

Well, you could do a couple of things. Since it's a YA novel, you could either have the enemy be a rival teen with similar powers (maybe the child of one of the gods?), but who has more EXPERIENCE, and kicks her tail at first. Or it can be another demi-god planning to usurp one of the gods for a seat in Valhalla. Or, it could even be one of the Valkyres who doesn't like the idea of a teen mortal being granted powers so easily. Lots of possiblities!

Hope that helps!


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I'm happy to answer questions about any aspect of writing novels, from the beginning kernel of an idea through completion. I can help with writing a query letter and synopsis to an agent or editor. I can explain publishing terminology and acronyms. I can also assist with questions about verifying the credentials of agents/publishers and how to proceed once you've been accepted for publication. I can teach the rules of formatting a manuscript, creating viable plots, characterization and flow in the following genres: romance, science fiction, fantasy, thrillers, suspense, horror, women's fiction, mainstream and mystery.


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