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I was thinking of fixing up the opening chapters of my novel, and sending it back (the first 3 chapters only) to St. martin's Press again.  Do you think that is a good idea?  I have already thought of ways to improve the first three chapters.
1.  You told me before that if St. martin's Press requested the first three chapters that I must have had a very good book proposal.  I don't think I do...all I sent in was a query letter, which isn't all that great, and a one-page synopsis.  I didn't send in marketing info, or a bio.  Do you think they liked the plot of the novel?

2.  I don't have an that a possible reason why I didn't get accepted by St. martin's?

3.  If they liked my novel, and I DID NOT have an agent, could they still offer me a book contract?  or is this unlikely?
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Dear Anon,
Good to hear from you again. It must have been a great inquiry letter and synopsis. Maybe in the letter it looked to them like it was going to be apples, but when they read the chapter, it was oranges.
Your second question, agents. An agent can lead a horse to water, but can't make it drink. You got St. Martins to look at your work, and that's all that an agent could have done for you. You didn't need an agent to get into St. Martins, but the book was not right for them. An agent could not have done anything.
If St. Martins had liked your book, and you did not have an agent, then they would have offered you a contract. You don't need an agent to get a contract (but you do need to run any contract by an attorney, agent or no).
Agents are necessary if you want to approach the big publishers that don't look at unagented work. Since they work with big publishers, agents like to represent celebrity clients, such as famous politicians, journalists, and established writers.
Finding an agent can be just as hard as finding a publisher. Plus, once you find an agent, he or she may just put your manuscript on a list, and not do much else to market it. You could end up losing six months to a year while the agent sits on it.
My advice is to continue to refine the manuscript and continue to send your inquiry/synopsis to likely publishers. When the next publisher asks to see it, then it will be an even better book and they'll be more likely to pick it up.
I hope this helps,

Hi Anon,
I know what you mean. I recently had a manuscript returned by a publisher who asked to see it after reading my inquiry/synopsis. When it came back, I re-edited it and feel it's much better now. I wanted to send it back to the same publisher and say, "See, I know what you didn't like, but now it's fixed!"
However, I would caution you against sending it back to St. Martins at this time. They might interpret it as nagging. I suggest that you keep sending inquiries and look for someone new to read it.
After some time, say about six months to a year, if you still haven't found a publisher, and if your manuscript has changed significantly, you could try St. Martin's again.
However, I'll bet that if you keep trying, you will find a good home for it before then.
If your bait attracted one good fish, it will probably attract another.

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Nori J. Muster


Writing and publishing books, including e-books.


I have been writing for publication since 1981, including years as a staff writer, associate editor, editorial writer, and freelance reporter. At this time, I have eight Kindle books for sale at

Lakes of Tempe Authors, Tempe, Arizona

Betrayal of the Spirit: My Life behind the Headlines of the Hare Krishna Movement
Dreaming Peace: Your Thoughts Can Change the World
Cult Recovery Handbook: Seven Paths to an Authentic Life
Child of the Cult
Learning to Flow with the Tao: The 64 Hexagrams of the I Ching
Positive Quotations: Wisdom from the Master Mind
Collected Writings: Five Books by Nori Muster
Noriland Art Gallery: Secrets from the Vault
Spiritual Summer and Other Short Stories

UCLA Extension Writer's Program, 1988 - 1994
Master's Degree in Interdisciplinary Studies, Western Oregon University, 1991

Awards and Honors
USA Today, Los Angeles Times, BBC World Services Focus on Faith, BBC Sunday Programme,, Glamour Magazine, Portland Mercury News, W-Five TV (Toronto), Publisher's Weekly, Boston Phoenix, San Francisco Chronicle, ABC TV News - 20/20, ABC radio, Associated Press, The Age (Melbourne),, The New York Times, Religious News Service, Dallas Morning News, Columbia Journalism School, Whole Life Times (Los Angeles), Toronto Sun, the John Dayle Show (KFYI AM, Phoenix), the Eliot Stein Show (syndicated radio and Internet broadcast), Discovery with Josh Wagner (KKUP, 91.5 FM, Santa Clara, California), KOGO (News Radio 600, San Diego), Jupiterís Girl syndicated radio show, Lakes Log.

Book Reviews:
Publisherís Weekly, Feminist Bookstore News, Yoga Journal, New York Post, Choice Magazine, Boston Herald, Nexus (Colorado), Gentle Strength Times, Coastlines (UCSB alumni), Theology Digest, Nova Religio, Rapport, India West,,

Book Signings:
Prescott College reunion; Gentle Strength Co-op, Tempe; Different Drummer Bookshop, Laguna Beach; L.A. Times Toastmasters; Biltmore Plaza Border's Books, Phoenix; Bodhi Tree Bookstore, Los Angeles; Health & Life Enrichment Expo, Pasadena; Sacramento Reads book festival, and others.

ISKCON World Review, Van Dhal Publications, Gentle Strength Times, Arizona Woman, Lakes Log, ICSA Today, Cultic Studies Review, University of Illinois Press, Kindle,,, Apple Books, and others.

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