Expert: Jourdan Devereaux - 7/11/2009

Question
Okay well... I have edited this zombie deck many times over, and it seems to do pretty well (made top 8 two weeks ago) but i still feel like something is wrong.  I really don't know what it is.  So advice would help!

Monsters: 17
3x Zombie Master
3x Pyramid Turtle
2x Goblin Zombie
2x Il Blud
1x Mezuki
1x Plaguespreader Zombie
1x Dark Armed Dragon
1x Caius The Shadow Monarch
1x Bone Crusher
1x Sangan
1x Morphing Jar

Spells: 15
3x Book of Life
2x Foolish Burial
2x Allure of Darkness
1x MST
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Heavy Storm
1x Monster Reborn
1x Giant Trunade
1x Gold Sarcophagus
1x Card of Safe Return
1x Creature Swap

Traps: 8
2x Dark Bribe
1x Mirror Force
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Karma Cut
1x Phoenix Wing (PWWB)
1x Compulsory Evac. Device

I feel like i may need some more traps instead of spells, but idk what to put in or take out because everything seems to just flow together.  Im confused. Help!

Answer
Well I'm not to sure what the "problem" is. Maybe it's your playstyle? Maybe your playing to conservative instead of aggressive? Or maybe the other way around?

But i'm going to try to help.

Fist, we're going to cut some traps.
-2 Dark Bribe
+2Solemn Judgment
-1Karma Cut
+1Solemn Judgment
-1Compulsary Evacution Device
-1PWWB
+2Zombie World (It's a field spell not a trap)

Now let's try to do something about the monsters.
-1Cauis The Shadow Monarch
-1Bone Crusher
+2Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon
-1Sangan
+1Psychic Commander
-1Morphing jar
+1Krebons

We're only going to take out 2 spells,though.
-1Giant Trunade
+1Terraforming
-1Gold Sarcophagus
+1Emergency Teleport